While this shows promise of being a great story (read this chapter so far, shall try to review as much as I can when I have useful tidbits
of thought), I can't help but hate you for 'killing' Harry off.
Still, I look forward to the next load of chapters, I am embarking on
reading those as soon as I hit the "review" button. Keep up the
style that I sense you have in this chapter!
You know I love this story!
In getting ready to read the eighth chapter, I had to go back and get a refresher. You know how it starts: well, I have to remember exactly how Harry "died", and then I remember OH, how fabulous the scene is where he finds out what really happened and that nobody knows he's alive, so I have to read that, and well, here I am reviewing again.
This is just such a fabulous chapter. Such a strong, emotional beginning that just gets me every time I read it. The death scene is perfectly done and the scene with Dumbledore is so very, very touching. And when he sees his friends now as Evan . . . sigh. ANGST!!!
Okay, so there you are. Haven't read the new chapter, but headed there now. Such a great story; so glad you're not giving it up!