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ginnysohma
Sunday 4th February 2007 18:28
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 43
| Marriage, Medinas and Souks. |
| aw it was cute!! bravo! |
| SillyGillie
Sunday 9th October 2005 19:41
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 543 | Marriage, Medinas and Souks. |
| What an awesome story! I clicked it because of the picture that was just made of it, and I'm very glad I did. Really nice portrayl of Ron and Hermione. Brilliant! |
| Bring and Fly
Friday 15th July 2005 08:45
5th year
Num. of Reviews: 201 | Marriage, Medinas and Souks. |
I love the tone of this --the voice that you used fits wonderfully to express both viewpoints. I can almost feel I'm wandering along with them, getting bumped by donkeys and assaulted by various smells and the beat of the sun as I read. Very strong on visual imagery and storyline, IMHO, a powerful piece of writing.
Ron and Hermione are spot-on (I loved the line about the tea!LOL) and though I doubt we'll ever see anything like this in canon, this will stick in my head as their honeymoon. A great out-take, bart! |
| Kelleypen
Thursday 14th July 2005 10:23
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 416 | Marriage, Medinas and Souks. |
| I love how sweet Ron is under his brashness. It's very insightful of you to write him this way. |
| blake
Wednesday 13th July 2005 15:35
| Marriage, Medinas and Souks. |
oh! i just loved the last line!!! (and the whole fic, but especially the last line
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| blake
Wednesday 13th July 2005 15:35
| Marriage, Medinas and Souks. |
oh! i just loved the last line!!! (and the whole fic, but especially the last line) |
Bart
Wednesday 13th July 2005 23:44 | Marriage, Medinas and Souks. (Author Response) |
Thanks! Glad you liked the story - and the last line - that was the
only scene I had pre-writen for the outtake, everything just then had
to lead up to it. 
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