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Reviews For Marriage, Medinas and Souks. by Bart

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Sunday 4th February 2007 18:28

1st year
Num. of Reviews: 43

Marriage, Medinas and Souks.
aw it was cute!! bravo!
Sunday 9th October 2005 19:41

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 543

Marriage, Medinas and Souks.
What an awesome story! I clicked it because of the picture that was just made of it, and I'm very glad I did. Really nice portrayl of Ron and Hermione. Brilliant!
Bring and Fly
Friday 15th July 2005 08:45

5th year
Num. of Reviews: 201

Marriage, Medinas and Souks.

I love the tone of this --the voice that you used fits wonderfully to express both viewpoints. I can almost feel I'm wandering along with them, getting bumped by donkeys and assaulted by various smells and the beat of the sun as I read. Very strong on visual imagery and storyline, IMHO, a powerful piece of writing.

Ron and Hermione are spot-on (I loved the line about the tea!LOL) and though I doubt we'll ever see anything like this in canon, this will stick in my head as their honeymoon. A great out-take, bart!

Thursday 14th July 2005 10:23

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 416

Marriage, Medinas and Souks.
I love how sweet Ron is under his brashness.  It's very insightful of you to write him this way.
Wednesday 13th July 2005 15:35

Marriage, Medinas and Souks.

oh! i just loved the last line!!! (and the whole fic, but especially the last line


Wednesday 13th July 2005 15:35

Marriage, Medinas and Souks.

oh! i just loved the last line!!! (and the whole fic, but especially the last line)

Wednesday 13th July 2005 23:44
Marriage, Medinas and Souks. (Author Response)
Thanks! Glad you liked the story - and the last line - that was the only scene I had pre-writen for the outtake, everything just then had to lead up to it. 
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