' Adela ' is Hermione Obliviated. She was captured, then rescued or escaped. She came across this Muggle, John, or he came across her. He took her in, and then tried to help her regain her memory. Hermione gets flashes of her past in dreams and visions. The underwater thing was obviously the Second Task, and the 'swish and flick' thing is in (was it their first?) Charms class where they learn Wingarium Leviosa.
That's about it. I hope I'm near the truth. At first I thought Adela was Hermione's mum when I read 'She fingered her wild bushy brown curls...', but I figured it was Hermione when I read ' “Adela?”...“It’s not my name though, is it?” '.
WOW. this is amazing!! Well, I know the one flashback is from Charms class, 1st year, but I was so excited about writing a review, I couldn't go look back for more. Oh, please, please, please update soon. You have no idea what this is doing to me....not knowing what's happening (although I do get the gist ) This is an amazing story, PLEASE update soon!!
Hi, passionflower!
I liked your story abt "Hope Fears The Fire of Love Burning", I hope you can write the more upcoming chapters sometime. I would love to hear from you sometime if u will do that to write more chapters, then.
Thank you
Sincerely,
Mylene
P.S. Keep the good work!
passionflower89 Sunday 7th August 2005 07:02
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Hope Keeps the fire of loving burning...
thanks for the review! i'll definately keep updating! :D
GOod story. One question which I am not sure if you can answer but does Hermione have amnesia or was her memory obliviated? Good plot line. Where does HArry fit into all of this. I assume he beat Voldemort since Malfoy is in Azkaban but that doesn't mean he is alive. I was jsut wondering cause HArry would eb devastaed if he lost Hermione.
passionflower89 Saturday 6th August 2005 08:15
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Thanks for the review.... .all your questions will be answered in good time
Theres something about this that I do like.,so I sincerely hope you have a complete fic in mind. I have a list I call "fics to read when completed" This one will join them. I cannot get interested till I can read the whole fic,as it is hard to remember a ch. ,2 and 3 or more weeks later.
passionflower89 Saturday 6th August 2005 03:03
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lol ok, thanks for reading... don't worry i'll definately finish this story....
Her flashbacks are from when she was underwater during the TriWizard
Tournament and when she learned Wingardium Leviosa. Please update soon!
With longer chapters! What is going to happen?! It's very nice so
far.
passionflower89 Saturday 6th August 2005 03:00
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thank you! no worries the next chapter is much longer!
This is really interesting... I like the use of the flash backs, and not using large events but small almost pointless ones.
The water one was from when Hermione was in the lake during the second task, GoF. The second flashback was from SS/PS and the movement is from the Levitation charm.
Well, it sounds like her underwater flashback is from the Tri-Wizard tournament's second task. And the "swish and flick" part is from one of her first Charms classes under Prof. Flitwick.
The amnisia bit adds an interesting twist to the story. Will she remember Ron when he inevitably finds her? It would probably break his heart if she tells him she doesn't have any idea who he is.
So far this is shaping up to be a pretty good story. I look forward to reading more.
PS: Where's Harry? No one's mentioned him yet, did he survive the last battle?
) This is an amazing story, PLEASE update soon!!
I would love to hear from you sometime if u will do that to write more chapters, then. 