I loved the story! I liked the alternate ending better than the original ending. I am planning on reading most of your other stories and possibly every single one of them depending on how much spare time I have. Hope you continue writing because I have read two of your stories and both were awesome! Good luck with future works, Kortnee
Although I much prefer happy endings to sad, I must say that the first ending was a great deal better. The bittersweet sadness made me cry, as did Ginny saying she came just like she'd promised, and talking to him, and getting herself ready and perfect the way he liked her to go and bid him farewell... ah now I've got myself crying as I'm writing this! It was just plain wonderful.
Wow. Well, I have to admit I like this ending better than the previous one, even if the first "A little Piece of You" was a lot more emotional and with powerful writing, I'll admit. But yes, this was definately a lot more happy. When I first read about Harry being blind in one eye, I had to re-read the paragraphto make sure I wasn't making a mistake. I nice touch, definately. Thanks for putting the alternate ending. Otherwise, I think I would have had nightmares of Harry dead....
Great job, your writing is amazing as ever and I'm very impressed.
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