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ninkenate
Monday 5th February 2007 11:18
3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 144
| Not a Good Mood |
| I like how Ginny tries to rationalize her confusion here. I'm sure she was confused in HBP as you've shown here. Fifteen is a rough age for a girl but a much more mature Ginny was shown after all the experiences. |
critmo
Sunday 11th February 2007 10:36 | Not a Good Mood (Author Response) |
| I couldn't agree more. That moment must've been pure hell for her. |
| daniel_r_crazy22
Monday 15th May 2006 16:47
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 1230 | Not a Good Mood |
that was cool. i loved the way ginny kept saying Harry |
| SillyGillie
Saturday 28th January 2006 12:04
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 543 | Not a Good Mood |
| Brilliant job as well. I love seeing Harry's reaction through Ginny's eyes. I love your characterization of Ginny. It's so on target. Really nice job! |
critmo
Sunday 29th January 2006 03:21 | Not a Good Mood (Author Response) |
| Thank you, I'm glad it makes sense. |
| Faelaern
Tuesday 13th December 2005 20:56
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 46 | Not a Good Mood |
| Going backwards, third time. Re: Your A/N: Not a feeble attempt at all.
I think you've got her down very well. You've done a good job at making
sense of the situation, explaining the rationale behind certain
actions, and all the while tension is present. I hope you do write
another one of these at some point. :)
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critmo
Wednesday 14th December 2005 04:53 | Not a Good Mood (Author Response) |
| I'm working on it. Thanks for r/r. |
| Seaspray
Friday 21st October 2005 10:47
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 9 | Not a Good Mood |
Wonderful! Very true, I think, to how Ginny would be feeling at this point. I loved how worried she was that *Harry* had seen her kissing Dean
"She let out a bitter laugh.
Oh, yes. That had to be it. After all these years, Harry sees her snogging Dean Thomas and suddenly he discovers that he's fallen incurably in love with her and he would like to jinx her boyfriend into a jelly. "
Ah Ginny, you'll never know how right you are. Good stuff!
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critmo
Saturday 22nd October 2005 00:19 | Not a Good Mood (Author Response) |
| To be honest, it's been worrying me that Harry starts realizing how much Ginny means to him due to something so negative as pure jealousy. |
| ginny_cho
Friday 14th October 2005 18:58
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 1 | Not a Good Mood |
Your style is very good. |
critmo
Saturday 15th October 2005 08:36 | Not a Good Mood (Author Response) |
| Thank you very much. |
| ridgeback77
Thursday 15th September 2005 08:19
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 159 | Not a Good Mood |
| Well done. Can't wait for the sequals.
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critmo
Friday 16th September 2005 01:09 | Not a Good Mood (Author Response) |
| You don't have to. There's another mood story here at PS. |
| PHsname
Monday 29th August 2005 19:30
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 161 | Not a Good Mood |
i really enjoyed this one. again, i dont 100% agree with your portrayal of Ginny, but still...it certainly makes sense, and it's not my place to contradict you there.
in any case, it's a great fic, and i hope to see more of these...:D |
critmo
Friday 16th September 2005 01:07 | Not a Good Mood (Author Response) |
| Sorry, must have overlooked your review - how do you disagree? |
| Delfino
Tuesday 16th August 2005 17:55
5th year
Num. of Reviews: 238 | Not a Good Mood |
| Awesome!! I LOVED it!! |
| Black_White_And_Grey
Thursday 11th August 2005 18:12
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 22 | Not a Good Mood |
| HahaHA, that is the best. I love your "Harry" intermittently interwining through this one-shot look inside Ginny's head. Sooo cute. I really love her character, and you've made her just as delicious here. Brilliant! :) ;) :D |
critmo
Friday 12th August 2005 01:16 | Not a Good Mood (Author Response) |
| Thank you. |
| amamama
Tuesday 9th August 2005 23:57
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 440 | Not a Good Mood |
Ginny's not in a good mood, no... why do Harry keep on interrupting her thoughts like this? Poor girl... 
When will you give us your interpretation of the thoughts of a good
mood Ginny? Good work (salute to your betas, as well), and keep
writing!
Thanks for sharing.
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critmo
Wednesday 10th August 2005 00:52 | Not a Good Mood (Author Response) |
| It will take at least two more stories to get to the good mood part. Hope you'll continue reading! |
| EvieMarie
Tuesday 9th August 2005 23:34
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 80 | Not a Good Mood |
I really like this. I know what you mean about Ginny - for me it was really just the lack of internal dialogue with Harry, and Harry/Ginny alone time. I'm glad you wrote this - it helps with trying to understand their relationship better.  You did a really great job - Ginny is spot-on.
Keep up the nice work! |
critmo
Wednesday 10th August 2005 00:51 | Not a Good Mood (Author Response) |
| While the Harry/Ginny comunity had developed detailed scenarios concerning the "ifs" and "hows", JKR obviously was more interested in other aspects. I find the development of their relationship hard to understand and it's brilliant that my interpretation makes sense to others. Thanks a lot for r/r. |
| VanishingShmink
Monday 8th August 2005 17:01
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 42 | Not a Good Mood |
| Best explanation of Ginny's behavior I've read. I wondered why she'd get so upset at Ron, nearly to the point of tears. Harry's presence explains it all quite neatly. |
critmo
Tuesday 9th August 2005 00:07 | Not a Good Mood (Author Response) |
| Glad it makes sense to you! |
| h2o
Monday 8th August 2005 13:25
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 32 | Not a Good Mood |
| What do you mean completed? This is far off from completed! You need to keep going with this one, it was great :D |
critmo
Tuesday 9th August 2005 00:06 | Not a Good Mood (Author Response) |
| Thanks for the encouragement, and as I've explained in the A/N, there will be a sequel. |
| gildedlily
Monday 8th August 2005 12:20
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 9 | Not a Good Mood |
| nice one! |
| Fuzzy
Monday 8th August 2005 10:54
3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 111 | Not a Good Mood |
| Lol, oh the irony! |
critmo
Tuesday 9th August 2005 00:02 | Not a Good Mood (Author Response) |
| Lol? My first fic without any conscious attempts at humor and you lol? ::sighs dramatically:: The irony! |
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