I really liked you chapter. I thought at the end of HBP he said he would stay until his birthday, but it works.
Also, I think it is so interesting to see how everyone imagines Harry and the Dursley's parting. Yours was good, not over the top, just there.
And Ron talking to Harry about Hermione was just right. It was funny but honest. I really like this sly way of getting Harry to be a groomsman opposite Ginny. I like to think they are all sitting there planning how to get them together.
Very nice start, i am running on, reading the rest of your finished chapters but It's a funny thing you know, we all know why Harry split with Ginny and that he really is not complete any more without her, I think we can also find that in what Dumbledore said to Harry and maybe a little of that in other places as well, but very nice beginning and I have to admit I like Fleur and Bill very much- well written
Ahhh, a wedding. Things like this make women's hearts go pitter pat. I admit my attitude is more of Ron's... I'm a guy ... but then again, when a wedding would be planned by a half-Veela Frenchwoman and Molly Weasley .... That's enough to make anyone run screaming off a cliff.
Good work. Loved the little 'guy talk' and the fun stuff at the very end.
Cool! I'm looking forward to seeing Harry in groomsman duty, with
Ginny as his consort. And Ron thinking about marriage, awww -
he's growing up! I hope Harry gets a picture of Dumbledore to his
album, he should've had one with them both. And I wonder what is
going on in Petunia's mind. Is she sorry that things worked out
the way they did, or what? Why did she hang her head?
A great start to what promises to be a wonderful story. If it's anywhere near as good as your other works it will be worth every second of the time we have to wait for each chapter. I love the way you use each of the Weasleys to implant thoughts in Harry's head. Devious. I would have expected nothing less from that clan, because after all, weasleysrcool. Keep up the great work.
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