Sorry, must also tell you that,yes the fic promises to be a very good one and I surely intend to stay with it.I loved the H/Her.dialogue. Great!It,s Harrys hero complex and saving people,and going it alone complex,that needs the work done on,and only then can he face up to the fact of not if,but how much he loves and needs Ginny. He knows he does down deep inside.
I like this. Poor,noble Harry.He is written as so much less than he could be,as he has had the Weasley family and Mione as examples of caring relationships,so must have learned something from them,wouldn,t you think? Too much is blamed on his lack with the Dursleys. It is always said that despite them,he is still good and kind,so why ,if he didn,t become a horrible person,in 10 yrs,can,t he embrace the concept of love during his 6 yrs at Hogwarts among so many loving people??Just the musings of a confused mind after reading hundreds of fics ,all from a different angle.
These are a very nice pair of chapters. I especially enjoyed the closing scene's Hermione. Somebody has to smack Harry upside the head about Ginny, and you've done a great job with that. I think her comments both in character and effective. I look forward to seeing where this story goes.
I loved this story. I've said this at SIYE and I repeat it here. Your
points about why Harry must not be away from Ginny are very well
thought. Although not all of them are here yet. I strongly recommend to
peolple here to keep reading.
Yes! Go Hermione! She spelled it out all right, and
hopefully Harry too will see that he needs Ginny. He needs her to
be the love he can get from only one person, his soul mate. Then
he'll just need to excercise his compasssion a bit and he'll be
complete and ready to defeat Voldemort.
I like this. Will the next update surface as quickly as this? I wouldn't mind.
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