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charpurcell2
Monday 18th March 2013 11:58


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 2

First Date
sooo good. are you doing more?
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Dad
Wednesday 11th February 2009 08:37


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 485

First Date
Very well written, but not exactly original. Still a nice bite sized read.
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Sheepie_101
Saturday 3rd January 2009 16:30


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 20

First Date
+ = LUV

Pure G/H fluff - and i loved it!!!!!!!!!!!! well done, u r gr8 at writing
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gymnastgal19
Monday 21st January 2008 16:19


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2461

First Date
hehe cute story
loved the ending :p
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harry fanatic
Monday 1st January 2007 15:18


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 16

First Date
It was enjoyable. I love romantic stories, and I loved this one. keep on writing.
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serenity
Thursday 13th July 2006 20:06


First Date
amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! luv it luv it luv it!!!
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hp4-sauce
Monday 6th February 2006 16:35


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 91

First Date
Very, very enjoyable. No matter how many times this missing moment has been done, if it has been done well, like this one, it's a joy to read.
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realm flower
Tuesday 31st January 2006 14:16


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 7

First Date
i read this one alot.....AND IT JUST GETS BETTER.
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distel
Saturday 7th January 2006 04:48


First Date
This is so not fair.. :( I wanne know how she teaches him! ;) *pleads* write a sequel, yeah?

Very good story :)

love

distel
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BobafetLucyBobafet
Wednesday 7th September 2005 11:45


First Date

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Thankyou SO much I wanted to see this!!!

Can you write; + =

Thanks

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Friday 2nd September 2005 21:32


First Date
 this is such a cute story...... it explains alot.... ur a really good author....keep writing!!
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Kaneley
Friday 19th August 2005 11:48


First Date
I loved that, it was so sweet!!! I never even thought about what happened after the common room incodent.
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Carly
Wednesday 17th August 2005 14:45


First Date
That was great. I really liked it. It was so fun. the best was the end ('' This is going to be fun.'' What is'' teaching you how to snog'')
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Delfino
Wednesday 17th August 2005 07:13


5th year
Num. of Reviews: 238

First Date

 This was great!! I loved Ginny's parting comment. Wonderful job, I had a great time reading this!

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Mrs.HarryPotter12
Tuesday 16th August 2005 21:34


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 7

First Date

I think you wrote the Harry Ginny stuff better than JKR in the 6th book. lol

-lain

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Tuesday 16th August 2005 20:21


First Date

Fun, fun, fun!  What a fun fic to read.  Nice job!

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Sweetblood123
Tuesday 16th August 2005 10:44


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 3

First Date
This is soo cute! I LOVE &  stories! ((It looks kinda like James and Lily, but i like that pariing too! lol. I guess Potter men have a thing for redhead women! lol))
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critmo
Tuesday 16th August 2005 00:38


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 685

First Date
Sweet, very nice, but would they really be that comfortable with each other so soon? - I can't really say I'd write it differently, but you got me thinking.
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amamama
Monday 15th August 2005 23:39


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 440

First Date
Experienced!Ginny and Inexperienced!Harry, and oh, so much in love.  Wonderful.  This is definitely a possible recount of what happened after their first kiss.  Lovely written.  I liked the way Ginny had noticed Harry's jealousy, how she'd been watching and hoping that he really liked her.  And his naming her the Ginny Weasley.

Really nice ficlet, are you going to do more, more missing H/G moments?  I sure wouldn't mind.

Oh, and there's one small nit hiding in there, about two pages up, when they enter the tower: Instinctively, Harry put her arms around her waist ... he put his arms around her waist, didn't he?  I sort of doubt he removed Ginny's arms from around his neck and placed them around her own waist.  Not really romantic...

Thanks for sharing!
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Wild Magelet
Monday 15th August 2005 23:32


3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 115

First Date

*Sigh* *Is wallowing in lovely H/G-ness* Beautifully written story: it made me want to hug Harry, Ginny and you for writing it all at the same time! I especially liked:

Im going out with Harry Potter, she said softly.

And Im going out with Ginny Weasley, Harry retorted. The Ginny Weasley.

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