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kopfsalat2000
Saturday 3rd November 2012 10:22


3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 124

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Poor Dean
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webster
Monday 21st June 2010 09:13


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 56

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Poor Dean, but still funny!
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KateB
Monday 26th May 2008 21:31


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 43

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I just read this for the first time, and it is delightful! Poor Dean!! I laughed out loud a couple of times. Thanks!
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gymnastgal19
Sunday 20th January 2008 15:19


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2461

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huh interesting story. never thought about what dean was thinking...
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majolie
Thursday 27th December 2007 17:56


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 476

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Very amusing. Poor Dean.
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pyromain
Saturday 13th October 2007 10:43


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 580

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Dean the tool to get harry set on true love. I really like that idea, loved the story for it.
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pottyluvsgin
Sunday 19th November 2006 11:24


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 10

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Quite funny from Dean's POV. I really enjoyed it.
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xara
Monday 26th June 2006 04:34


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Good idea of fict, you show a new Dean... Luna is so my adorable lunatic!!
And / is !love xDDD kises
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Wooster
Thursday 22nd June 2006 13:06


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 525

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Well...that's interesting. Wow. Very intriguing and cool!
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AKissInACrisis
Sunday 8th January 2006 13:51


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 30

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This made me laugh out loud - well done!
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Astrid
Sunday 11th December 2005 22:44


7th year
Num. of Reviews: 336

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Poor Dean! I like the characterization of Romilda and him, though. Oh, and  I love Luna!
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Ladybug
Thursday 8th December 2005 17:35


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 375

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I really, really enjoyed this story - I feel so much for Dean (but not enough to stop Harry and Ginny!) - and I love Lavendar at the end: Friends. Please..." That's just wonderful! Beautifully written and immensely enjoyable, every part. Well done!

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Mariposa
Thursday 27th October 2005 10:51


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OMG that was so great! I really loved Dean's POV. I really think he was holding a grudge. great story!

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the whizbee that lost it's fizz
Sunday 18th September 2005 10:51


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lol, poor dean.
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Friday 9th September 2005 17:22


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wow!

i usually dont read the stories....but i read right through this one very nicely..

u did very well in writing this. everyones character was perfect

loved all the mushyness too!!

 

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Bella
Thursday 8th September 2005 14:56


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 77

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That was THE funniest fic I have read in a long time. Your sense of humor is so JK-Rowlingish that I am still stunned and amazed by it. Excellent, excellent job. Three thumbs up!

I had tons of favorite lines, and this is just one of them:
<<Oh, Merlin... Dean eyed her warily. She didn't... fancy him, did she? Luna was a nice enough girl and all, but she was a bit, well...>>

Everyone was very in-character and the scene played out exactly as I envisioned it would. I loved the bit at the end when Dean sees Harry and Ginny out the window. *sigh* so romantic. Also, the ending part with Lavender was perfect.
Great job. Please write more soon!
Bella

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SillyGillie
Tuesday 6th September 2005 21:37


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 543

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"Bloody brilliant..."

Seriously, awesome job. I loved seeing my favorite scene from someone elses point of view. You should write one in Ginny's. I was always curious to see if it was meant to be just a hug or...? Brilliant job once more!

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dalf
Saturday 3rd September 2005 01:47


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  Well written.  I like how the diffrence in prespective makes the whole scene "smarmy" and "disgusting", in a really realistic way.  I think you captured that part of it perfectly. 

  It fell down a bit whith Luna.  I think you could have probbly left her out, espically since I don't think anyone in fan fiction ever gets her just right.  She really is more strange than she is wise (and more blunt than observant). 

  But, again the end worked out and the bit about Luna prefering the company of Neville was nice.
Wild Magelet
Sunday 4th September 2005 19:38
1: The Shattered Glass (Author Response)

Thank you for reviewing!  Yeah, I personally didn't find the scene disgusting (it still has me smiling when I think about it!) but when I eventually got round to thinking about Dean, I realised he probably wouldn't agree! Having to watch your ex-girlfriend snogging away very publicly can't have been much fun! Especially when you have to share a dorm room with the snogging partner. Relations in the 6th year dorms must have been strained all round!

I didn't plan to put Luna in; I just got to that bit and thought, if I were Dean, who would be the last person I'd want making comments on this situation? And Luna and Lavender were both right up there!  She is hard to figure out though. Sometimes insane; sometimes actually quite sweet. I do like her and I love the dynamics between her and Neville: it still seems strange to me that JKR squashed a romance angle there in interviews because there definitely seems to be a vibe!

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Lulabelle
Friday 2nd September 2005 19:05


5th year
Num. of Reviews: 210

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I loved Dean's inner monologue.  I even laughed til I snorted!  Good Job!

Wild Magelet
Sunday 4th September 2005 19:33
1: The Shattered Glass (Author Response)
Lol, that happens to me all the time on PhoenixSong! Usually when there're other people around!  Thank you!
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TigerLily8186
Friday 2nd September 2005 17:47


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 97

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oooh when you tell it this way, it makes me feel so sorry for Dean. Luna was quite amusing. I love her bit about a predetermined plot... This is very emotional.
Wild Magelet
Sunday 4th September 2005 19:31
1: The Shattered Glass (Author Response)
Thanks for reviewing! And reading!  I have to admit that I felt a bit sorry for Dean, too. He didn't come across as a completely bad character - just unfortunate enough to get between Harry and Ginny!
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