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sonartrs
Monday 11th May 2009 09:11


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 3

Make It So, Mister Potter
This was great!
You should really add more to it, not to say you should risk a hypoglycemic episode to do it (if the 'low-blood-sugar' reference was to your maybe being diabetic).
I've read a lot of fan fiction on this and other "Potter-verse" sites and a few have caught my eye as being worthy of being presented in another media platform. Matbe not feature film; the production costs would be astronomical, to say the least. I'm thinking small-screen, like cable TV.
Imagine it, a program dedicated to bringing these storylines to life.
Just like the current novels and films, I predict this being a colossal hit with kids and parents alike.

But all that aside, you really should add more to this one... a LOT more!
Great job!
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Goddessa39
Monday 1st September 2008 22:43


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 6

Make It So, Mister Potter
Hehehe. I love this. If you want some more oneshots shot out, then make some little drabbles about how they play around.
sonicdale
Tuesday 2nd September 2008 05:13
Make It So, Mister Potter (Author Response)
There are some drabbles on the back burner. I've only recently returned to HP fanfic, so stay tuned
Thanks for reading!
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majolie
Monday 7th January 2008 18:41


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 476

Make It So, Mister Potter
That was a great romp. I've always thought about how so much of the muggle world's imaginings could have been based on magic they accidentally witnessed, but have never scene a fanfic around the concept. Really fun.
sonicdale
Tuesday 2nd September 2008 05:15
Make It So, Mister Potter (Author Response)
I had a list that was pretty extensive on what the obliviators could have missed in the wizarding world. But these things were the most fun to write.

Thanks for reading.
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Steven Carnell
Wednesday 5th December 2007 04:31


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 74

Make It So, Mister Potter
Good bit of fun. Well written!
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gymnastgal19
Saturday 1st December 2007 13:57


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2461

Make It So, Mister Potter
hahah that was so cute I loved this amazing how you intergrated the muggle stuff and use the room of requirement :p
sonicdale
Tuesday 2nd September 2008 05:13
Make It So, Mister Potter (Author Response)
Thanks for reading.
It was as much fun to write as well.
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psycholis
Saturday 20th October 2007 01:33


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 50

Make It So, Mister Potter
I was perusing random fics by author and happened to stumble upon this wonderful piece. What an innovative and creative use of the room of requirement. The bit about Disney himself being a squib is a nice touch. All the references to all my favorite pieces of fiction really make this a great little fic. I especially appreciate the bit with Arthur C Clarke - 'Any sufficiently advanced technology is indistinguishable from magic.' Clarke is effectively the cornerstone of hard sci-fi, and to tie that into the wonderful world of Harry Potter is really coming full circle. Thank you for this piece.

Brennen
sonicdale
Sunday 21st October 2007 12:19
Make It So, Mister Potter (Author Response)
Thanks so much for the kind words!
It was fun to read - and I'm glad you had fun.
Thanks for reading. I hope you can read my other works, and I'm currently poking my muses to write more. Thanks again.
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Pippa..
Tuesday 9th October 2007 22:53


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 12

Make It So, Mister Potter
This story is great!
I laughed at times.. you have a great imagination!
sonicdale
Wednesday 10th October 2007 05:14
Make It So, Mister Potter (Author Response)
Thanks!
If I've helped someone laugh today, I'm a lucky guy.

Imagination and writing is my challenge. I've tried to have fun with my stories, and make them enjoyable to myself and everyone. I'm glad to have done so.

Thanks for reading!
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No Idea Why I Smile
Saturday 12th May 2007 12:23


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 72

Make It So, Mister Potter
OMG! it was hilarious! i loved it. Hahaha...its so unlikely for Hermione and Dean to be trekkies, but it was HILARIOUS!

Tricia
sonicdale
Saturday 12th May 2007 14:48
Make It So, Mister Potter (Author Response)
Trekkies are mostly secretive unless they meet one of their own.
I don't see why these two couldn't be one. Anything is possible in my own mind, right?


Thanks for reading.
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Neczy
Sunday 30th April 2006 10:47


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 1

Make It So, Mister Potter
Great job! I think this is an awesome story.
sonicdale
Sunday 30th April 2006 13:18
Make It So, Mister Potter (Author Response)
Thanks.
I'm glad you liked it.
Thanks for reading.
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Saturday 29th April 2006 11:22


Make It So, Mister Potter

love it!
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Fate
Saturday 29th April 2006 08:57


Make It So, Mister Potter
*cackles*
This was brilliant!!!
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curiouskitty
Saturday 29th April 2006 02:26


Make It So, Mister Potter
realy good fic, very enjoyable read!
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JamieBell
Sunday 19th March 2006 13:27


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 6

Make It So, Mister Potter
Dean's a Trekkie...who knew? As soon as I saw the title of this fic, I knew exactly where it was from, and I had to read it. Very nicely done, fitting Walt Disney into the wizarding world. I like the idea of him being a Squib, yet he wasn't bitter, was he? Lovely...
sonicdale
Sunday 19th March 2006 21:58
Make It So, Mister Potter (Author Response)
Nope, not bitter. But he found an outlet for his magical side, I think.
Thanks for reading!
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Hoss
Saturday 31st December 2005 19:43


4th year
Num. of Reviews: 179

Make It So, Mister Potter
 How about 10 more one shot's of this story please
sonicdale
Tuesday 3rd January 2006 05:14
Make It So, Mister Potter (Author Response)
10?
Just 10?
Repeat after me: Oooonnnneeee - Sssshhhhooootttt.



I wanted to make it bigger, but the muse said no.
Thanks for reading!
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Oops, I swallowed my gum!
Wednesday 28th December 2005 21:40


Make It So, Mister Potter

This story was excellent! It was really creative about the way ypu explained the  Walt Disney stories and movies,but if I may say, How dare you mention Lord of the Rings ! As soon as I read it, my immediate reaction was something like this:  . It's okay I guess, it was still a good story. Keep writing and keep up the good work.

By the way, I'm pretty sure that artoo is spelled R-2, or maybe R2, something like that.

Liz'M

sonicdale
Thursday 29th December 2005 04:41
Make It So, Mister Potter (Author Response)
Having read all the SW novels, Artoo is an accepted spelling. Check with starwars.com.

As for the LOTR, it was in passing. I don't like crossing over HP and LOTR. It doesn't quite fit - as you implied. So we agree there.

Thanks for reading!
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Sugarquills23
Wednesday 2nd November 2005 08:55


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 16

Make It So, Mister Potter

Walt Disney was a squib! Of course, it all makes perfect sense now!

I love this finished product Dale! Morphing the RoR into a magical version of the Holodeck was genius. I could see the group making their way back for a bit of fun on a regular basis. They all need a diversion from their own version of Darth Vadar...

As always, fun and enjoyable.

Sugar

 

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TreyFury97
Thursday 20th October 2005 20:24


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 46

Make It So, Mister Potter

I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! I read it awhile ago, but only got a chnce to reviewing now.  Including ST: TNG was phenomenal, and the nod to Disneyland(I'm from and live in LA) was excellent.  One of the best one shots I've ever read. A brilliant story.

Trey

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dogbertcarroll
Friday 23rd September 2005 11:40


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 5

Make It So, Mister Potter
I'm surprised you didn't have them step out of the Holodeck onto the Enterprise shocking the crew. Excellent work.
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dave gerecke
Thursday 22nd September 2005 06:36


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 15

Make It So, Mister Potter
Very nice. could expand on this to a multi chapter story and use various tech toys from other universes to expand the HP one. Make the wizard kids situp and take notice of what is going on around them.
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Wednesday 21st September 2005 19:38


Make It So, Mister Potter

That was the best Story I have ever seen.  May you please please pleaseTry to make a story where in the room of requirement Harry and his friends are The Ones in the Matrix battling a swarm of Smiths!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!    What do you think of that Idea?

 

I think its a really good idea

 



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