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Monday 19th September 2005 15:31

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 375

1: The Beginning

I really, really enjoy reading your stories.

I love the prologue (and you always have such great titles!) - I think it sets up Lily and James' characters beautifully, as well as the whole environment of the first rise of Voldemort. It's great seeing all the other people there, too - Malfoys, Blacks and Prewetts, etc.

This chapter is great, too. The dialogue is interesting and natural and the creepy bits a suitably creepy! I'll be interested to see how J & L's relationship progresses and it's always good to see how they demonstrate some of the characteristics and foibles we see in Harry.

Great story. Congratualtions.

Jim Sharp
Monday 19th September 2005 14:51

1: The Beginning
Wonderful story. I take it that this is sixth year for them.  I like your take on all the characters.  I look forward to more chapters.
Tuesday 13th September 2005 17:59

2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 89

1: The Beginning

What an awesome story!  I haven't read too many MPPW era pieces, but this one is the most enjoyable of the few I have. Keep up the great work!



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