Great story. Loved the different perspectves particularly the last chapter!
hewithnoname Saturday 12th August 2006 11:04
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I'm so glad you enjoyed them. I hope you read more of my fic's. They're a bit diffrent than Dog Star. I hope you like them. If so please review, all feed back is greatfully recived.
Great chapter. You put a lot of emotion and soul into this, which really made it a worthwhile read. I can see the relation in all of their grief. It is very sad to think about it, still, the writing is beautiful. Excellent job.
hewithnoname Thursday 11th May 2006 08:33
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Thanks for the review, I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I was trying to get across the feeling of loss of hope. That even the best of us can feel at a loss. This was my first ever Fic, so you saying this means alot.
Oh, lovely angst and all the bitter tears and soulful words that go along with it! My cup of tea for sure. I enjoyed how you jumped into the heads of the principle characters and portrayed the moments of guilt and self-doubt that would make sense with the events at the DoM. It's fitting that Ginny was the rescuer and the one to pull Harry from the "brink" literally and figuratively. I loved the image of the Dog Star winking in the sky and watching over Harry always.
hewithnoname Wednesday 12th April 2006 13:10
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Thanks again for the review. The last one ties in with the first one, ending the series. I will hopefully get you back for making me cry. lol.
Great job. I had always wondered what had happened with Harry
bewteen the time in Dumbledore's office and the scene in the Hospital
Wing. I loved that Ginny was the one to pull Harry back from the
edge. Nice missing moment.
hewithnoname Sunday 2nd October 2005 15:45
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Thank you, it means alot. It's the parents turn next.
The dialogues are a bit abrupt, but the subject is gripping. Will there be more?
hewithnoname Monday 19th September 2005 09:40
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I don't know what that means but thank you. Next time give me your name and I'll ask you for tips, (I really mean this.) All help is welcomed and taken in. As this is my first ever fic, I am greatfull you took the time to reveiw. There will be other veiw points. So please read and review.
I've always wanted to see this missing moment, and you did it so well. This was my one disappointment with HBP that we didn't get to see any of Harry's grieving process.
I loved how the others were all thinking about him while he was thinking he was alone. Nicely done.
hewithnoname Monday 19th September 2005 09:35
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Thank you, coming from you this is wonderfull as it was your fic that got me going on fan fiction. So it's all your fault lol. Thank you for this review, it's Nevile's turn next and then the parents view.
Lovely emotional punch. I really enjoy all four viewpoints. That night back had to be really heart-wrending for all the Ministry battle participants. Wonderful missing moment.
:) Tante
hewithnoname Sunday 18th September 2005 10:48
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Oh you, you made me go all red now. Thanks for all the help
Nice, heartwrenching, but nice. I really liked the way Hermione,
Ron and Ginny all had their thoughts centering around Harry, and
especially how Ginny managed to get to him and help him find his
star. Very nice.
One misspelling stood out, however: If he was not hear to see her (first recall of Ginny's Harry-thoughts, second paragraph), I really guess it should be 'here'?
Thanks for sharing, I really look forward to see how this will progress.
hewithnoname Sunday 18th September 2005 10:54
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Thanks for the sighting, I'm now going to line my Beta against the wall and shoot him. (After he has finnished with my fic's LOL). Not really I'll just send him your e-mail add and you can tell him. Thanks for the reveiw though. It's Neville's turn next and then the parents.
