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Guenivere
Tuesday 14th July 2009 09:56


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 29

Moment of Clarity
I just finished both this story, your Power of Emotion , and Curse of the Damned (did I spell that right?), but anyway, all three of those were absolutly positivly overly-awesome!!!!!
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Thorn
Wednesday 17th December 2008 15:29


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 51

Moment of Clarity
this is good and just like Ginny I can see it just like you say!
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bookish327
Tuesday 8th July 2008 17:36


3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 122

Moment of Clarity
Very interesting and well-written. Good work.
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angeli
Saturday 3rd May 2008 07:26


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 22

Moment of Clarity
this is a vey cute piece, but it makes me wonder, where is the bit where ginny tells hermione? you are leaving us hanging here!!! but otherwise, i love your work, especially the 7th horcrux!! how did you no abt all that stuff before the release of book 7? any way keep on writing!! i liked it betta than the cannon!!!
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afpease
Thursday 4th October 2007 11:51


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 34

Moment of Clarity
Another lovely and fun "missing moment", that fits in perfectly with canon! To me, your speculation on a Ginny / Hermione conversation happening about here must be on the mark. I actually wonder in how much detail JKR thought all this stuff out - she is amazing!

Thank you for your hard work and wonderful ideas!
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Astrid
Thursday 24th May 2007 23:21


7th year
Num. of Reviews: 336

Moment of Clarity
I love Missing Moments! This is excellent. You can see the tender sibling relationship between Ginny and Ron, which is often missing from fics. I also like how they both know how the other really feels about Hermione and Harry. Good work!
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bluetooth
Tuesday 13th February 2007 12:12


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 13

Moment of Clarity
I really loved this missing moment, along with the Harry/Ginny one in the common room. This one here makes me want to see what happened next. Why don't you do one about Ginny / Hermione's talk?
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chocoquills
Thursday 25th January 2007 11:49


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 14

Moment of Clarity
Aw that was so, so, so cute!!!
Really well written!
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h2o
Tuesday 2nd January 2007 09:04


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 32

Moment of Clarity
Just wanted to say that you did a great job with this litle fic! Ginny is spot on really.. gotta see if you've written a sequel to this with Hermione & Ginny talking perhaps?
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Becky
Sunday 30th July 2006 10:03


Moment of Clarity
I love your missing moments. You've defiantely got the charachters just right. Like Giny's temper. I agree with you about why Ginny had the blazing look.
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DanAngelus
Sunday 2nd July 2006 18:12


3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 133

Moment of Clarity
I like the missing moments you've been adding, it's also nice to see things from Ginnys POV.. even if it is all just speculation. As always, I love the work!

and
Forever
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lupin is the chocolate man
Friday 19th May 2006 22:26


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 13

Moment of Clarity
LOVE it!
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willow
Wednesday 15th March 2006 12:42


4th year
Num. of Reviews: 162

Moment of Clarity
i really loved this- it's a shame it had to end! i know, it's a missing moment but still, i liked your ginny!

i hope you have more stuff here- i'm going off now to look u up!

and yes- it is fun to speculate- especially when you do it well!
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MuggleMomma
Sunday 12th March 2006 20:28


Moment of Clarity
Great story as usual! This is a test.
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Josie C
Sunday 26th February 2006 07:47


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 26

Moment of Clarity
Aww...I loved it.
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batsnumbereleven
Saturday 25th February 2006 15:55


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 17

Moment of Clarity
UK edition of Half-blood Prince suggests that it was Peakes's bat that McLaggen used and that it was probably the Bludger that hit Harry, not actually the bat, since it suggests that McLaggen mis-hit it rather than missed it entirely:

Sure enough, McLaggen, for reasons best known to himself, had pulled Peakes's bat from him and appeared to be demonstrating how to hit a Bludger towards an oncoming Cadwallader.

' Will you give him back his bat and get back to the goalposts! roared Harry, pelting towards McLaggen just as McLaggen took a ferocious swipe at the Bludger and mis-hit it.

(HBP, Uk Edn, p.389)



Apart from that, it was a very interesting look at what might have been a defining point in Harry and Ginny's relationship, even if Harry wasn't aware of it. Ginny is characterised very well, and her internal dialogue fits the situation nicely. She has the right balance of concern and uncertainty about how she's feeling about Harry.
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Felix Felicis
Friday 3rd February 2006 17:28


5th year
Num. of Reviews: 201

Moment of Clarity
Well, I must say I really liked your story. Missing moments are fun, aren't they! That said, I have to add a compliment on your characterization of Ginny. I particularly like how she shows hesitation just to go visit Ron, because Harry is in the Hospital Wing as well. When Ron catches her staring at Harry, I can just imagine the smug thoughts in his head. She's clearly torn about having a boyfriend, but still loving Harry (as always), but not wanting to admit that she still loves him. Poor girl! Keep up the good work, you're one of my favorite authors!
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Liz'M
Sunday 18th December 2005 15:03


Moment of Clarity

I love all your stories, but you think about making them longer.(Extra H/G fluff plz!!!)

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Cristina
Wednesday 19th October 2005 21:47


Moment of Clarity

That was really very nice! You write very well & the characters are spot on. I have also often wondered how Ginny's visit to the hospital wing went and I love this take on it. It seems very right that Ginny would pick up on his changed attitude but doubt her own interpretation.

You also did a fantastic job with The Power of Emotion, as well as its sequel, both of which are now in my top 10  fanfiction favourites. It seems that the world you envision for HP is very similar to mine. (Although since I'm a Hermione by nature, I always imagine her as being a bit less rule-bound than she appears in your world!).

Anyway - congratulations on your wonderful stories and I can't wait to read more!

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jjqc101
Sunday 9th October 2005 08:13


Moment of Clarity
YAY!! very good! but when will we see book seven from you!! these little stories are like teasers, give us something massive, please!!!
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