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Thorn
Monday 8th December 2008 11:26


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 51

Chapter Two
that line "you've got your whole life in front" of you is so sad
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OnceInALifetime
Sunday 25th February 2007 16:11


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 9

Chapter Two
luv the story! whens ur next update? cant wait!
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Evelyn
Friday 18th August 2006 11:28


7th year
Num. of Reviews: 340

Chapter Two
Woo... Nice.

Poor Lily is a swot, no matter what she says... Quite good results, indeed.

And, now, it's settled. Fun mixed with fluff is a trademark of yours. This proves it.
Lily pointed her wand at the bright light bulb. “Nox,” she instructed it firmly. The bulb cracked cleanly in half and fell to the floor, where it broke into even smaller pieces.
Oops, Lily thought to herself. “Ah, well, at least it’s off,” she mumbled aloud. She allowed herself to chuckle for a minute before falling into a deep slumber. She dreamt of James kissing her as light bulbs shattered all around them.

Brilliant.
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sally
Wednesday 1st February 2006 20:03


Chapter Two
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!
PLEASE YOU CAN'T STOP NOW!!
I NEED THE NEXT CHAPTER, I
CAN'T GO ON WITH OUT IT
THIS IS MY ABSOLUTE FAVORITE
STORY EVER!!!
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amorentia
Wednesday 1st February 2006 16:58


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 1

Chapter Two
This is great! Please tell me you'll be continueing with the story!!
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WhiteWitch
Monday 9th January 2006 13:51


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 47

Chapter Two

NONONON! You can't do that you evil woman! I LURVE this story and you write more right now. PLEASE! I'll beg, *begs*, threaten *threatens*, and do other stuff *does other stuff*, but PLEASE write more soon!

 

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Cherry
Wednesday 28th December 2005 09:39


4th year
Num. of Reviews: 179

Chapter Two

Come on Bella! I've been waiting for EVER for the next chapter of this! Please hurry!

Cherry xxx

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GryffindorKT
Tuesday 20th December 2005 08:05


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 2

Chapter Two
I absolutely love this story!!!  It is exactly the way I pictured James and Lily's relationship in my mind.  Please update soon!!!
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I LOVE LILY JAMES
Monday 12th December 2005 20:47


Chapter Two
PPPLLLEEEAAASSSEEE WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER SOON!! MIGHT DIE IF NOT!!! PLEASE I LOVE THIS STORY, AND I'VE BEEN FOLLOWING IT SINCE THE BEGINNING, YOU CAN'T STOP NOW ! PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON!!!
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car car
Sunday 4th December 2005 22:17


Chapter Two
hey i totally am in love with this story! i've been following it forever. please please write the next chapter, its killing me! keep up the amazing work
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stephanie
Sunday 4th December 2005 20:59


Chapter Two
i absolutly love you writing! this story is my all time favorte! i've been waiting so long for chapter three! please do it soon! thanx and keep up the good work
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Redhead
Tuesday 29th November 2005 14:10


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 2

Chapter Two

i am one of the girls that hearther got addicted to your story...and use to think fan fiction was well pointless...but i love your writing, more for its stlye than the Harry Potter aspect...it is amazing and well juice...can't get enough i adore it!

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Heather
Tuesday 22nd November 2005 18:15


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 2

Chapter Two

This is the best Lily/James fic I've read! I got about half the girls in my grade to start reading it by accident, and now they're bugging me every day asking if you've updated.

So...You'd better make it soon or I'll be pestered to death. :)

And one of them is probably going to read this, so I'd better shut up.

Heather

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Cherry
Wednesday 9th November 2005 08:39


4th year
Num. of Reviews: 179

Chapter Two

Come on! Needing update VERY soon! I feel as if I've wait for years! come on, come on! please hurry!

Cherry xxx

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kandy
Saturday 22nd October 2005 16:08


Chapter Two
OMG,  that  is too funny.Nothing worse than your dad interupting you!But anyway great story so far butwhat about more chapters ok.
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Becky
Saturday 15th October 2005 12:54


Chapter Two
Up-date soon! Please! I need something to read in my bored life!
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A W
Sunday 9th October 2005 19:09


Chapter Two

I've enjoyed every chapter of this story--I can't wait until the next one comes out!!! Thank you for writing this excellent story. It is probably the best Harry Potter fan fiction I've ever read (and probably better than some published books I've read!!!). Thanks again and please keep writing!!!

A W

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SillyGillie
Saturday 8th October 2005 10:31


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 543

Chapter Two
How unfair! You have to update really really soon or I might go mad. What a brilliant chapter! I loved it! How adorable and cute and excellent. Please update as quickly as you can manage! I loved it!
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Bucktavius
Monday 3rd October 2005 16:05


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 73

Chapter Two
yay! i'm glad that your back! been a while between updates. but the story is still as good as ever. can't wait for some new developments. sirius' place shouldbe good
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Xaphania
Monday 3rd October 2005 07:35


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 33

Chapter Two
Oh, I love this story so much! This chapter was great, really well written. I'm looking forward to chapter 3!
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