Review Navigation: Previous Chapter 1 Chapter 2 Chapter 3 Chapter 4 Next Show All Showing 1 to 8 of 8 Ladybug Thursday 18th January 2007 17:36 Hogwarts alumni Num. of Reviews: 375 Chapter 1 Hey DaisyFlo!
Originally I deferred reading this story because it's a WIP (my limited brain-space has trouble remembering plots!) but now I have the great pleasure of betaing for you, I'm really enjoying it. You strike the perfect balance between humour and drama, much as JKR does - I love the conversation in the train ("Not Dean, you idiot! VOLDEMORT!" ) and the image of Harry lying against the door trying to listen in and Vernon stepping on his face! LOL! A super opening chapter - I look forward to this story unfolding. Delani Saturday 8th October 2005 11:43 7th year Num. of Reviews: 319 Chapter 1
Hah. That quote you have is unfortunately too true, but I only hope it doesn't apply to this story... Well done, and I like the title.
DaisyFlo Sunday 16th October 2005 03:24 Chapter 1 (Author Response)
Well you'll have to wait to find out whether the quote applies to this story...
The next chapter's on its way...
Dalf Friday 7th October 2005 23:08 Chapter 1 "... averting Harry’s eyes, muttered she would be spending the journey with
some friends who had asked her to sit with them ‘ages ago.’"
You want avoiding not averting. Or perhaps Averting HER
eyes form looking at Harry or whatever. But, I don't think she
can avert someone else's eyes.
Other than that and the rather over done and OOC "petuna change
of heart" it was a pretty good start. I am happy you did not have
Hermione and ROn tell him he was being stupid about Ginny.
DaisyFlo Sunday 16th October 2005 03:30 Chapter 1 (Author Response)
Thanks for the tips, it could be avoiding, as when I was writing the chapter, my pre-betas and I weren't sure what to put and decided on averting.
Cherry Thursday 6th October 2005 22:47 4th year Num. of Reviews: 179 Chapter 1
Brill, so emotional. I love it! next one please!
DaisyFlo Friday 7th October 2005 09:04 Chapter 1 (Author Response)
Thanks for the review! It's so e
ncouraging and don't worry, the next chapters on it's way soon!
COUSIN Thursday 6th October 2005 13:19 Chapter 1
hey cuz might be biased because of being a blood relative and all but i think it rocks my socks.
love n kisses
DaisyFlo Sunday 16th October 2005 03:32 Chapter 1 (Author Response)
You're too cute, I couldn't of written it without you... (sob, sob...)
See ya soon,
Bucktavius Thursday 6th October 2005 07:53 2nd year Num. of Reviews: 73 Chapter 1 very good start. It should be interesting to see where you go with it.
Hasn't angry Harry kind of been done though, with all of the post Ootp
fics? just a thought
DaisyFlo Friday 7th October 2005 09:06 Chapter 1 (Author Response)
Thanks for your review, and i suppose angry Harry has been done, but angry Harry is so fun to write! Next chapter coming soon...
aschowin Wednesday 5th October 2005 18:01 3rd year Num. of Reviews: 136 Chapter 1 Good start. This chapter is very well written. I can't wait to see where your plot goes. Keep up the good writing. DaisyFlo Sunday 16th October 2005 03:26 Chapter 1 (Author Response)
Thanks, I've got some plot twists which should interest you, Next chapter your way soon.
PadfootLives12 Wednesday 5th October 2005 17:57 1st year Num. of Reviews: 16 Chapter 1 Very good, very good! I loved Harry's "Erm...resting?" line! I hope to see more of this story!
DaisyFlo Friday 7th October 2005 09:09 Chapter 1 (Author Response)
Hey, Padfoot Lives!
Thanks or the review, I promise there'll be nore lines like that to come! The next chapter will be on it's way to you very soon!
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