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Reviews For Hot Chocolate and Cinnamon by Carrick O'Rourke

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gymnastgal19
Friday 22nd August 2008 07:21


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2461

Hot Chocolate and Cinnamon
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RIPHedwig
Tuesday 10th June 2008 04:11


5th year
Num. of Reviews: 210

Hot Chocolate and Cinnamon
That was gorgeous!
Aww.... so nice and natural!
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chiantiqueen
Thursday 20th December 2007 22:56


4th year
Num. of Reviews: 159

Hot Chocolate and Cinnamon
Aww, such a lovely story, made me feel all warm and fuzzy.
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Hajra
Thursday 10th August 2006 08:44


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 19

Hot Chocolate and Cinnamon
A lovely story... and i must admit it's given me quite the craving for some hot chocolate laced with Cinnamon! Thank you!
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Miri
Saturday 29th July 2006 11:56


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 47

Hot Chocolate and Cinnamon
A very charming story with excellent grammar, word chice etc.(Yeah for good writing skills!)
Love the way you start and end with the description of the soothing qualities of the spice and then equate it with Ginny. I use cinnamon in a lot of my cooking so I know how grat it can be.
Long live the Quartet!
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harry_ginnyphile
Friday 9th June 2006 16:42


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 44

Hot Chocolate and Cinnamon
This is my favourite kind of fluff ... sweet and innocent and just plain beautiful. You managed to capture the beauty of Harry and Ginny with great imagery and something as simple as a cup of hot chocolate in the middle of the night. The depth of feeling begins with the boiling of the kettle ...
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daniel_r_crazy22
Tuesday 16th May 2006 13:17


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 1230

Hot Chocolate and Cinnamon
i love it. it is soo sweet.
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EmeraldPrincess
Sunday 22nd January 2006 04:53


3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 131

Hot Chocolate and Cinnamon
I love the way its written, so so so, i dunno just very, wonderful and sweet. There it goes wonderful and sweet. There are not many stories I have read with this touch of [i]sweetness[/i] and [i]beauty[/i]. It was a relief to read one fic like it. Since I can only find like 1 in every 100 or so... Its wonderful and yea.. I have nothing else to say.
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EmeraldPrincess
Sunday 22nd January 2006 04:52


3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 131

Hot Chocolate and Cinnamon
I love the way its written, so so so, i dunno just very, wonderful and sweet. There it goes wonderful and sweet. There are not many stories I have read with this touch of [italic]sweetness[/italic] and [italic]beauty[/italic]. It was a relief to read one fic like it. Since I can only find like 1 in every 100 or so... Its wonderful and yea.. I have nothing else to say.
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Lily Jane
Saturday 21st January 2006 04:25


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 34

Hot Chocolate and Cinnamon
:D You know, I always drink hot chocolate with cinnamon. It actually took me quite a lot of sleepless nights to find the recipe for the perfect chocolate, so I found the title very intriguing. I like it, you showed in a very interesting way how long it sometimes take to finally see what's right in front of you. And comparing Ginny to cinnamon - just brilliant:D
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kathaania
Friday 20th January 2006 15:04


Hot Chocolate and Cinnamon
Lovely fic! The definition of cinamon at the top really helped guide it all the way through. The comparison at the end between Ginny and cinamon was perfect. Perfectly Ginny.
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paladin
Friday 20th January 2006 04:07


4th year
Num. of Reviews: 159

Hot Chocolate and Cinnamon
Ok, so how many mugs of Hot Chocolate did you finish while creating this sweet, warm story?  You've done a fantasic job of creating moments that all of us can appreciate and compare with our own memories.  Who hasn't looked back to try and remember the first time they 'kenw' what they felt for thier love?  The beauty is the bond that you created over a simple gesture presented by someone who cares, but didn't hold expectations.

~Great Job! Thank you, for sharing this.

P.S. Now I have to stop by the store on the way home.
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naomi
Thursday 19th January 2006 04:40


Hot Chocolate and Cinnamon

that was beautiful! are you going to add to it? id love to hear more.

from naomi

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Passion
Wednesday 18th January 2006 17:51


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 4

Hot Chocolate and Cinnamon
I liked it, though it was a bit too mushy. Ginny talked about the Cinnamon in a way no fourteen or fifteen year old would talk. I felt as if you tried to give the story too much meaning. At the same time, it was evident you liked the story , and it was really cute at times.
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Tuesday 17th January 2006 22:35


Hot Chocolate and Cinnamon
Excellent!
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Narumi
Monday 16th January 2006 14:34


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 368

Hot Chocolate and Cinnamon
Ohhh, lovely.
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Monday 16th January 2006 11:53


Hot Chocolate and Cinnamon
This is beautiful!  This is so awesome!  So understated, not at all overdone.  And you tied it up perfectly.  Job well done!
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Wooster
Monday 16th January 2006 03:39


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 525

Hot Chocolate and Cinnamon
That was fantastic! Extremely well written, entirely believable, and very cute. I bow to you.
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BasketKiwi
Monday 28th November 2005 09:58


5th year
Num. of Reviews: 233

Hot Chocolate and Cinnamon
Wow. I loved it!! ^^ I liked the way you added the cinnamon in and how you wrote about the progression and all. Marvelous job! xD
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simplicity
Friday 18th November 2005 03:22


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 2

Hot Chocolate and Cinnamon
Again aww. I loved this story and your portrayal of Harry and Ginny. This was so fluffy but good. And Ron was sweet also with the hot chocolate and saving it for Harry and Ginny. Yay!
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