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Rari P Thursday 20th October 2005 04:28
| Week One |
Love it, really well written, although Harry can't read too much of a History of Magic or he'd know you can't apparate within Hogwarts!
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Bronte Thursday 20th October 2005 04:39 | Week One (Author Response) |
Thanks for reviewing my story.
Harry is reading 'A History of Magic' not to be confused with Hermione's favourite tome 'Hogwarts: A History'. I'm sure that somewhere in A History of Magic' there's something about Hogwarts and it's magical wards and limitations.
I'm gald you like the story. Chapter Four: Week Three is submitted and should be up soon and the final chapter is in the process of being written right now. |
| Hank Monday 17th October 2005 12:45 4th year Num. of Reviews: 157
| Week One |
Nice job! I like how you've tied the fairy tales into the magical world so seamlessly. I also enjoyed reading about Harry pulling Dudley's tail. It's about time the poor kid had some fun at his cousin's expense! |
Bronte Monday 17th October 2005 13:30 | Week One (Author Response) |
Thanks for taking the time to review.
I like taking the mickey out Dudley :-) There's more to come.
I have to give credit to my pre-beta Bucktavius for all the help on the fairy-tales. We bandied some ideas about and he wrote the text-book excerpt to clarify the lot.
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| cckeimig Wednesday 12th October 2005 17:57 Hogwarts alumni Num. of Reviews: 406
| Week One |
| I love this! And the reading level is great for kids at the book 1 stage! I especially liked the explanations for the fairy tales. Brilliant. |
Bronte Thursday 13th October 2005 00:33 | Week One (Author Response) |
Thank you for taking the time to review.
I'm glad you like it. I'll pass this on to my pre-beta, Buctavius,too. He was very helpful with the fairy-tales.
Since it's all Harry POV, I am trying to keep it to the thoughts and language of an 11-year old, one thats not Hermione anyway. I'm glad to hear I succeeded.
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| Bucktavius Wednesday 12th October 2005 08:04 2nd year Num. of Reviews: 73
| Week One |
good job! what a great author! ;)
seriously though, very enjoyable |
Bronte Wednesday 12th October 2005 09:20 | Week One (Author Response) |
Thanks.
I must say I do have a great pre-beta to help me on my way. *giggle*
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| Melindaleo Tuesday 11th October 2005 17:38 Hogwarts alumni Num. of Reviews: 455
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| Cute idea for a story. I've often wondered how the Dursleys reacted to Harry after his return from Diagon Alley. I doubt they would have been pleasant. Will we get to see some Dursley interaction? |
Bronte Wednesday 12th October 2005 01:43 | Week One (Author Response) |
Yay! my first review. Thank you for reviewing my story
There is some Dursley interaction coming up, mostly fun with Dudley. That's the most fun to write *grins*. One must remember that as the Dursley's tended to ignore Harry there's only so much i feel justified writing.
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