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Rari P
Thursday 20th October 2005 04:28

Week One

Love it, really well written, although Harry can't read too much of a History of Magic or he'd know you can't apparate within Hogwarts!


Thursday 20th October 2005 04:39
Week One (Author Response)

Thanks for reviewing my story.

Harry is reading 'A History of Magic' not to be confused with Hermione's favourite tome 'Hogwarts: A History'. I'm sure that somewhere in A History of Magic' there's something about Hogwarts and it's magical wards and limitations.


I'm gald you like the story. Chapter Four: Week Three is submitted and should be up soon and the final chapter is in the process of being written right now.

Monday 17th October 2005 12:45

4th year
Num. of Reviews: 158

Week One
Nice job!  I like how you've tied the fairy tales into the magical world so seamlessly.  I also enjoyed reading about Harry pulling Dudley's tail.    It's about time the poor kid had some fun at his cousin's expense!
Monday 17th October 2005 13:30
Week One (Author Response)

Thanks for taking the time to review.

I like taking the mickey out Dudley :-) There's more to come.

I have to give credit to my pre-beta Bucktavius for all the help on the fairy-tales. We bandied some ideas about and he wrote the text-book excerpt to clarify the lot.


Wednesday 12th October 2005 17:57

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 406

Week One
I love this! And the reading level is great for kids at the book 1 stage! I especially liked the explanations for the fairy tales. Brilliant.
Thursday 13th October 2005 00:33
Week One (Author Response)

Thank you for taking the time to review.

I'm glad you like it. I'll pass this on to my pre-beta, Buctavius,too. He was very helpful with the fairy-tales.

Since it's all Harry POV, I am trying to keep it to the thoughts and language of an 11-year old, one thats not Hermione anyway. I'm glad to hear I succeeded.


Wednesday 12th October 2005 08:04

2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 73

Week One

good job! what a great author! ;)

seriously though, very enjoyable

Wednesday 12th October 2005 09:20
Week One (Author Response)


 I must say I do have a great pre-beta to help me on my way. *giggle*



Tuesday 11th October 2005 17:38

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 457

Week One
Cute idea for a story.  I've often wondered how the Dursleys reacted to Harry after his return from Diagon Alley.  I doubt they would have been pleasant.  Will we get to see some Dursley interaction?
Wednesday 12th October 2005 01:43
Week One (Author Response)

Yay! my first review. Thank you for reviewing my story

There is some Dursley interaction coming up, mostly fun with Dudley. That's the most fun to write *grins*. One must remember that as the Dursley's tended to ignore Harry there's only so much i feel justified writing.


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