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gymnastgal19
Wednesday 20th August 2008 22:29
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2461
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| pyromain
Tuesday 26th June 2007 08:41
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 580 | The First Rule |
real funny, George and Fred are lucky to get away without being hexed. |
| Delani
Sunday 13th August 2006 15:18
7th year
Num. of Reviews: 319 | The First Rule |
 oh that was quite fun. |
| Novera
Tuesday 11th July 2006 21:24
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 157 | The First Rule |
| Poor Git |
| margot
Wednesday 25th January 2006 11:14
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I loved this. You write very well- especially Fred and George. I DID laugh out loud. When I read "Merlin on a bike!", I made an of myself in a public place. Couldn't help it. Also your phrasing - "socially unhurried pace"- is as clever as JKR's "newly and happily impervious" in the intro quote. My own writing feels so clumsy in comparison : (
I look forward to reading more of your stories! |
Bring and Fly
Monday 30th January 2006 08:35 | The First Rule (Author Response) |
Thank you, Margot. Crumbs! --I am  now.
My own writing feels so clumsy in comparison Speaking for myself, I frequently feel like this after I read certain stories or particular authors. You're not alone --keep writing and ask someone whose opinion you trust you to read and comment, but above all --keep writing! *hugs*
Baffy |
| Delfino
Sunday 22nd January 2006 07:16
5th year
Num. of Reviews: 238 | The First Rule |
| Ha! I loved it! Absolutely hysterical! Harry's muttering and un-finished sentences started to grow weary for a while until Ginny came. I loved the twins part in this. Great job! |
| Ashley06
Saturday 31st December 2005 00:06
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 41 | The First Rule |
| Thats cool I liked this story. |
Bring and Fly
Monday 2nd January 2006 02:43 | The First Rule (Author Response) |
| Thank you, Ashley! :) |
| SillyGillie
Tuesday 18th October 2005 14:16
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 543 | The First Rule |
| Nice job! Very funny. |
Bring and Fly
Wednesday 19th October 2005 08:43 | The First Rule (Author Response) |
| Thank you! |
| Tron
Tuesday 18th October 2005 06:54
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Excellent story! I just love the twins! They are two of my favorite (aside from Harry and Ginny of course) characters. It's just a shame we don't get to see as much of them in the books as I would like.
Poor Harry, so sweet and trusting. You just have to love him! He should know better than to trust anything the twins are involved with.
What is going on with your story, And In That Sleep? Will you be updating soon? I am eagerly awaiting an update!
Thank you for sharing this wonderful story. |
Bring and Fly
Tuesday 18th October 2005 07:04 | The First Rule (Author Response) |
Thanks Tron! Yes, you would think Harry would have thought twice about the chocolate, but that's him all over, I think!
AITS is actually finished and was all done before Book 6 and then I had Computer Woes. I've killed 2 computers, lol, and had one resusitated by a colleague but until I can persuade it to synchronise with my pda, an update of AITS may be a tad longer. You made me  by asking though! |
| arios
Sunday 16th October 2005 17:11
3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 137 | The First Rule |
LOL!!  |
Bring and Fly
Monday 17th October 2005 00:28 | The First Rule (Author Response) |
| Thank you Arios! Glad to raise a chuckle. |
| ridgeback77
Sunday 16th October 2005 08:50
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 159 | The First Rule |
| Nice job. I'm surprised Ginny didn't hex first and ask questions later though. At least she knew the antidote.
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Bring and Fly
Sunday 16th October 2005 13:00 | The First Rule (Author Response) |
| Thank you. Yes, I think Ginny must be learning restraint... ;) As for knowing the antidote, I think she's fairly well in with the twins, and their Wheezes. |
| melray1228
Sunday 16th October 2005 08:48
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 54 | The First Rule |
| That was quite enjoyable, Baffy! You definitely nailed the twins. They are so much fun to write and read. I also loved how Ginny is the youngest and smallest Weasley, and yet, they're all afraid of her. Too good! |
Bring and Fly
Sunday 16th October 2005 12:58 | The First Rule (Author Response) |
| Thank you Mel. I'm glad you liked the twins because I always find them hard to write and not make 'over the top'. Yes, I think the boys would be right to be a little afraid of Ginny --'the female of the species' and all that! ;) |
| Seaspray
Sunday 16th October 2005 06:27
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 9 | The First Rule |
| I really liked this- very amusing and in character. Poor Harry. I was disappointed not to hear anything about it in canon the Harry/Ginny romance but I think your version was pretty accurate to how they'd react. Oh, and I especially liked the part about the two little girls buying instant darkness powder. The twins should be more careful. *shakes head*. Great fic! |
Bring and Fly
Sunday 16th October 2005 12:55 | The First Rule (Author Response) |
Thank you, Seaspray, for making me your first review! And for your kind comments.
There are many excellent authors on this site, so don't be shy --read and review! |
| PHsname
Sunday 16th October 2005 00:56
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 161 | The First Rule |
funnnn story.
great job!! |
Bring and Fly
Sunday 16th October 2005 12:52 | The First Rule (Author Response) |
| Thank you for reading and reviewing! |
| Antosha
Saturday 15th October 2005 22:21
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 92 | The First Rule |
Good thing Ginny knew the antidote...
;-) |
Bring and Fly
Sunday 16th October 2005 12:52 | The First Rule (Author Response) |
| Yes, wasn't it... I think Ginny is more like the twins than we suspect. Thanks for reading and reviewing. |
| Rensselair
Saturday 15th October 2005 19:11
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 15 | The First Rule |
loved the comment about the girls with the darkness powder...almost snuck it right be
great story on the whole...very funny and I loved Fred and george in it |
Bring and Fly
Sunday 16th October 2005 12:51 | The First Rule (Author Response) |
| Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it and stopped by to review. |
| tante
Saturday 15th October 2005 18:49
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 169 | The First Rule |
| Yes, quite brilliant. I've not seen hide nor hair of Ronnie Barker in a good couple decades. The U.S. doesn't know what they're missing. Thanks for a very good laugh. I love the twins and you write them brilliantly. |
Bring and Fly
Sunday 16th October 2005 12:50 | The First Rule (Author Response) |
| Thank you, Tante. Yes, the great man retired from tv about twenty years ago. His recent death was the spur to finish this piece inspired by one of his sketches and have it posted. I'm glad you liked my twins, as I find them hard to write. |
| Antonia East
Saturday 15th October 2005 17:09
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Another dosage of Baffy Brilliance (TM) |
Bring and Fly
Sunday 16th October 2005 12:47 | The First Rule (Author Response) |
Thanks Monty. |
| Ladybug
Saturday 15th October 2005 17:03
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 375 | The First Rule |
YES! I was thinking of the Two Ronnies all the way through this - it was wonderful, very funny. Thank you. |
Bring and Fly
Sunday 16th October 2005 12:45 | The First Rule (Author Response) |
| Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I hope Mr B would have approved. |
| EvieMarie
Saturday 15th October 2005 14:46
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 80 | The First Rule |
That was cute! Well done.
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