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Mr.potter47
Sunday 14th June 2009 10:18
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 3
| Ultima Incantatem |
| I nearly cried! It was so sad. I liked the part when Ron started to cry, it really showed how much he cared for Harry. |
| Patches
Wednesday 13th February 2008 03:20
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 1141 | Ultima Incantatem |
| Wow! This was a really moving story. Thanks for writing it. As things have slowed down some I am going back and reading some stories that were written long ago. this was very well done. I'm glad you took the time. p |
| Augrey07
Sunday 6th January 2008 14:21
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 3 | Ultima Incantatem |
| That was so beautiful it made me cry. The depiction of the charecters was just so perfect. |
| pyromain
Monday 11th June 2007 09:38
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 580 | Ultima Incantatem |
| I really liked that harry pissed of Voldy in his ghostlike form. |
| WickedWitch
Monday 30th April 2007 20:09
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 2 | Ultima Incantatem |
That made me cry too. This will be shorter then the review in Legend, but still, not a sentence long. Clearly 
I loved it, but I still think that the reunion was kind of like a regular conversation at some parts, except for the "You've got to let me go part." I dunno, I guess I would have liked more angst 
But still, I loved it. Keep the wonderful stories coming! |
| No Idea Why I Smile
Monday 1st January 2007 22:01
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 72 | Ultima Incantatem |
bloody hell, that was heart wrenching...
i swear, i cried...
pretty hard...trying not cry now...it was good, but bloody sad, you hear?
~*NIWIS*~
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| EmeraldPrincess
Tuesday 25th April 2006 21:28
3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 131 | Ultima Incantatem |
Sad.. So so so sad! And yet so very happy!
I nearly cried..
I\'m close to tears!! I can''t seem to accpect that thats it!
Must be hard for them, to say goodbye.. Great job on potraying (sp?) everyone, it fit nicely!
~EmeraldPrincess |
| Hoss
Wednesday 22nd February 2006 14:12
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 178 | Ultima Incantatem |
| Hope to see more at some point in the futher. thanks. |
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Monday 26th December 2005 14:50
| Ultima Incantatem |
| Great story. |
| Elsha
Sunday 25th December 2005 22:57
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 5 | Ultima Incantatem |
Oh.
*wipes away tears*
As I said in my other review: I hate Harry dying stories. Really, really hate them. But this was....it was sad and funny and just so true to the characters. Especially to Harry, whose foremost quality is his bravery and willingness to sacrifice himself for others. It was encapsulated in the line where he told Ginny that saving her from the Chamber was the best thing he'd ever done.
And so Hermione, too, to find this spell.
But I think the best line was the one about Ron feeling like he'd changed back to himself; the imagery was just perfect. Brilliant. Keep writing. |
| Astrid
Sunday 30th October 2005 11:08
7th year
Num. of Reviews: 336 | Ultima Incantatem |
| I never read fics where Harry dies too, but this was very well-done anyway. Good work! |
| tta
Thursday 27th October 2005 13:37
| Ultima Incantatem |
*wibbles* Oh god... This is just... heartbreaking... Harry's dead... I don't know how I'd be able to deal with it if it happened in the seventh book.
Wonderful fic, everyone was in character, great writing it's all just... wonderful.
Thank you! |
| Warren Boucher
Monday 24th October 2005 05:53
| Ultima Incantatem |
| Simply The Best |
| PHsname
Saturday 22nd October 2005 21:00
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 161 | Ultima Incantatem |
aww...
very sad story...
though the emotions seemed a bit muted during their meeting with Harry's echo...i dunno...mebbe i was just expecting more corny melodrama...
haha.
well done, and two thumbs up!! |
Ajarntham
Monday 24th October 2005 07:48 | Ultima Incantatem (Author Response) |
| Thanks for the thumbs! I like a good corny melodrama too, but I'm not good at writing them (not intentionally, anyway :) |
| SillyGillie
Tuesday 18th October 2005 13:13
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 543 | Ultima Incantatem |
| Aw how dare you make a story so sad. *sob* Aww you made my eyes water. And I have to tell you thats really quite difficult to do, these Harry dead stories accomplish it pretty well though. Really nice. Aww Harry so sweet even after death. Poor Ginny, I hope she's ok now. |
Ajarntham
Wednesday 19th October 2005 06:36 | Ultima Incantatem (Author Response) |
| Sorry about the eyes, but I promise Ginny will be OK. :)(Story in the works.) Thanks for the review! |
| Connor Landon
Monday 17th October 2005 20:24
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 188 | Ultima Incantatem |
| I'm so teared up. This was good, very good. I enjoyed it immensely. Nice work. |
| Paige2310
Monday 17th October 2005 13:11
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 8 | Ultima Incantatem |
| oh my. that was so sad and good. I really liked it despite the fact that I am feeling so bad for Ginny, Hermione, Ron and Harry right now haha |
| dibberne
Monday 17th October 2005 11:30
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 32 | Ultima Incantatem |
| Wow. That was an incredible bit of writing. You actually made a good story out of Harry's death - they're generally either sappy-sweet or just depressing. This was touching, original, and enjoyable. Thanks. |
Ajarntham
Monday 17th October 2005 21:34 | Ultima Incantatem (Author Response) |
| I appreciate that very much. I hadn't tried writing this kind of story before, and it is hard to avoid falling into melodrama. I certainly wouldn't claim I had fully succeeded, but I'm glad the story succeeded at least well enough to do something for you. |
| MrRobertsIII
Monday 17th October 2005 11:15
3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 117 | Ultima Incantatem |
| Very sad and sweet. Got my teary eyed. |
| Waywren Truesong
Monday 17th October 2005 08:14
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 47 | Ultima Incantatem |
| *bawls* That was so *lovely*! The perfect mix of love and grief and revenge and gallow's-humour... |
Ajarntham
Monday 17th October 2005 21:38 | Ultima Incantatem (Author Response) |
| Thank you very much! I'm glad the mix of ingredients suited your reading palate. (I was hoping the bits of dark humor would help keep it from being too cloying.) |
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