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samblood
Friday 19th January 2007 03:22


Chapter 2
That was good Written almost like an actual Harry Potter Book! Your story is actually te best one I've seen on phoenixsong. You kept the characters beleivable and true to their roles, and your tone is highly perfected. Thanks for four chapters where I was able to make a breif visit back to the world of Harry Potter!

Sam, fellow Harry Potter Fan and Fellow Writer.
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Ladybug
Thursday 18th January 2007 18:43


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 375

Chapter 2
So much great stuff in this chapter - you're very good at not getting bogged down in wordiness but still giving depth to the characters and plot. I loved the part about hugs and Hermione crying - that's just a lovely picture of the trio's friendship. And Ginny's present is marvellous - can't wait to see that come back into the story (as I'm sure it will). And I thought the lifting of the blood-protection spell was really cool. Poor Harry and Ginny, though - I feel for them both ...
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Grandma Kate
Sunday 14th January 2007 16:15


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 966

Chapter 2
Harry and Ginny never have it easy, do they? He keeps hurting her, despite his best intentions. And she reacts, even when she knows she shouldn't.
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Cherry
Tuesday 8th November 2005 20:50


4th year
Num. of Reviews: 179

Chapter 2

Well done. But I don't want Harry to leave her! keep em coming.

Cherry xxx

DaisyFlo
Sunday 13th November 2005 08:33
Chapter 2 (Author Response)

Thanks Cherry, hope you enjoy the third chapter!

Daisyflo xxxxxx

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dancing_in_the_mushrooms
Sunday 23rd October 2005 03:36


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 5

Chapter 2

Way to go, sis.

DaisyFlo
Sunday 23rd October 2005 04:14
Chapter 2 (Author Response)

Ha ha ha Mushroom ==>>

But thanks for reviewng anyway. I'm quite annoyed that you didn't review my first chapter...

Flo xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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PadfootLives12
Wednesday 19th October 2005 16:06


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 16

Chapter 2
Aw...harry! Aw....Ginny!! *sob*

I loved this chapter!! I loved all of the parts with Harry and Ginny, but my favorite part was when Hermione was crying about Harry's first hug from a relative. Awwww!!

I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!

-Padfoot Lives
DaisyFlo
Saturday 22nd October 2005 10:06
Chapter 2 (Author Response)

Hey!

Thanks, it was a bit of an emotional chapter to write...(sob, sob) I nearly cried when I was writing the bit about Hermione crying about the hug...

Next chapter on it's way to you soon, there might be some more emotional bits in that one too...

Daisyflo xxxxx!

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Tuesday 18th October 2005 20:56


Chapter 2
Tha twas great!!...you should make the chapters a little longer. But thats just my opinion...GREAT JOB!
DaisyFlo
Saturday 22nd October 2005 10:02
Chapter 2 (Author Response)

Hey!

I agree that the chapters are a little short, but it's quality, not quantity! Still, the next chapter is much longer than the others!

Thanks,

Daisyflo xxx

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Bagelz
Tuesday 18th October 2005 12:32


3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 133

Chapter 2
Great addition ... I actually liked the whole 'Petunia realizes she loves Harry thing...' and Uncle Vernon showing some concern.  I guess I'm just an optimist, but I always wanted Harry to get along with his relatives someday once they respected his status, but I guess we shall never see it.  Kinda odd, but I really wanted the Snape/Harry relationship to work out someday ... and I still think it may!  Looking forward to the rest of the story!
DaisyFlo
Saturday 22nd October 2005 10:00
Chapter 2 (Author Response)

Hey

Thanks for the review, maybe the Snape/Harry relationship will work one day...you'll just have to wait and see!

I didn't want Vernon to say that he loves Harry, cause that's just creepy, but I did want to show that Vernon was a bit concerened!

Thanks

Daisyflo xxx

 

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