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Thursday 11th May 2006 09:23

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 510

Chapter Two
Did it have to be Harrods?
Kinda cliched.
Liked the interplay between the two. And I loved the last chapter and how you made the scene change work very well. Harry couldn't breathe ... heh.

Loved the "changing" in the middle of the store. I just wish Ron wasn't THIS stupid, but ... hey, he can be, right?
Loved that last line. Famous last words. Reminds me of "Forget Paris"

Good work.
Thursday 27th April 2006 05:22

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 525

Chapter Two
Excellent last line there. Ok, must say this: Ron is adorable when he's bumbling. So cute! Very clever idea about the transfiguration of wizard clothes.
Friday 30th December 2005 05:40

Chapter Two
I love this plot! And the shopping scene was really funny. Never thought about wizard clothes like that before...
Monday 7th November 2005 06:42

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 685

Chapter Two
Ok, still interesting. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Wednesday 2nd November 2005 10:58

4th year
Num. of Reviews: 179

Chapter Two

Very good.


Shadow Hider
Tuesday 1st November 2005 13:09

3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 123

Chapter Two
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