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gymnastgal19
Monday 1st September 2008 16:22
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2461
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| gymnastgal19
Tuesday 2nd October 2007 15:13
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2461 | Not Done Yet |
that was so sweet with ginny coming and finding harry, although if i were harry, then i would be thinking that if Ginny could find them, imagine how easy it would be for voldemort to find them... lol
great story though |
| jackie
Saturday 5th August 2006 22:21
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| i think it really fit in with the original story and coulda been written by j.k her self thats how good it is keep going ur gunna be a great sum dayi give u a ten outa ten |
| JoanB
Sunday 20th November 2005 14:15
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| WOW! You may not believe this but this is how I have always pictured their story continuing on in the last book...weither or not it will I dunno but you have taken my own mental images and put them to pen and er well computer? LOL Wonderful...please dont stop, comtinue this story. I cant wait! |
| Delani
Saturday 12th November 2005 08:47
7th year
Num. of Reviews: 319 | Not Done Yet |
"His pulse quickened, and he wouldn’t dare look at her. She had said it. The one thing she shouldn’t have, the one thing that would probably seal her fate. The one thing, he realized, that he had wanted and feared more than anything to hear her say."
Right at this point, this piece clicked for me. That line was so perfect and had the drama I craved yet the the style it needed to be true. Well done on this piece... |
| Brianne
Tuesday 8th November 2005 16:22
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| Awesome! You did really well with the character portrayals. |
| paladin
Monday 7th November 2005 19:13
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 159 | Not Done Yet |
Your story is great! You did a great job of
capturing Harry's angst toward his feeling for her and her
determination that JKR has clearly set for her. I really liked
the ending, when he kisses the palm of her hand. Tender and
sensual. It sets this story apart from the usual "their lips met
in a passionate kiss" line.
I hope to see more soon.
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| BasketKiwi
Monday 7th November 2005 18:52
5th year
Num. of Reviews: 233 | Not Done Yet |
| Aww!! That was so sweet! I loved it, very well done! Though he should have said it back to her! Ah well... No, really though, it was fabulous! Wonderful job! |
| cckeimig
Monday 7th November 2005 17:06
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 406 | Not Done Yet |
| Unfair attack. Poor Harry never had a chance. Loved it. |
| naiad
Monday 7th November 2005 15:04
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| Lovely. Thanks for the excellent scene. |
| critmo
Monday 7th November 2005 13:05
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 684 | Not Done Yet |
| Very nicely done! I agree with you, why the other two and not Ginny, is a fundamental question. |
| Stormdelver
Monday 7th November 2005 05:51
3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 116 | Not Done Yet |
| Great story- I could only pray that this would be the way JKR goes- our pair need each other- and maybe that is the point she will make and what will make Harry win in the end- of course equally would be the anger unleased if anything happens to her...but I can only trust in this,JKR is said to be a fan of "Start Wars" (i am not) and perhaps she will look there as if Luke used his anger to kill Vader he would have then easilly have become the next dark lord, however her other favorites do not paint such a happy ending (Lord of the Rings and Narnia) but if I had a choice, your way would be among my top picks- Bravo. |
| Cherry
Sunday 6th November 2005 22:55
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 179 | Not Done Yet |
Thats good enought for me.
Cherry xxx |
| Nate
Sunday 6th November 2005 21:24
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| not a bad start. keep on it, you have something good going
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| Rensselair
Sunday 6th November 2005 21:00
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 15 | Not Done Yet |
Awesome story
I could really feel the emotions -- they were realistic and palpable
I could totally see this happening in book 7 |
| Rutzy
Sunday 6th November 2005 20:48
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 20 | Not Done Yet |
amazing read! so in canon characters: hopefully JKR thinks along the same plot line in Book 7 -- so what's the real encore, can't wait :> |
| EJH0904
Sunday 6th November 2005 18:38
3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 123 | Not Done Yet |
| Wonderful - it's so good that I'm disappointed that it's a one-shot! Brilliantly written! |
| EvieMarie
Sunday 6th November 2005 17:20
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 80 | Not Done Yet |
wonderful, wonderful, wonderful....
::sigh::
You've got brilliant dialog skills.
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| ridgeback77
Sunday 6th November 2005 16:39
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 159 | Not Done Yet |
| Nice job. I think you captured both Harry and Ginny quite well.
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| Harry luvs Ginny
Sunday 6th November 2005 16:32
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So beautiful...very realistic to the books. It made me almost cry...very lovely piece. I would love to see more, m'dear!
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