that had me loling quite a bit. ive also had to sit around and hear women comment on what they're trying on, and this sounds non too differently from what i've heard. sounds like the coming chapter should b funny
Great job with this chapter! ^^ I like the way you portray the characters, they all seem to be very canon. And Hermione was so cute in this chapter! ("Is this all of it? How does this go on… oh that CAN'T be right…. They've GOT to be KIDDING! I have underwear that covers more than this!" "Now that you mention it, it would be interesting to observe their athletic physiques.") Priceless. xD
Harry luvs Gingin Saturday 12th November 2005 03:37
2: Girl Talk
I loved this! This is a perfect example of how Hermione/Ginny feels about Ron/Harry. Its great to see the acual relationship between the two girls...or should I say. young women? Keep up the good work, m'dear!
Nice, lol. I'm definitely looking forward to the boys' reactions. I'll channel Prof. Trelawney and predict severe blushing from Harry and jaw dropping from Ron. Possibly followed by serious drooling and nondescript sounds. Great job!