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Ladybug
Saturday 28th January 2006 21:35


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 375

Chapter Two
Wonderful. This is actually very refreshing to read - a whole new perspective and a very believable turnaround for Dudley. I'm starting to admire him! *gasp* I'm still impressed with how well you keep us hooked with no dialogue at all! Well done.
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JamieBell
Tuesday 17th January 2006 19:51


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 6

Chapter Two

This story is very intriguing--although your development of Dudley was very rapid, nevertheless, it was done in a really believable manner. It's very interesting that he would find psychology a fascinating subject--but it serves him well by showing him how really wretched his family was to Harry. I liked your descriptions of the grown-up Harry and Ginny (brief, but you could defintely tell that it was her). I do hope they'll meet up--I'm dying to see the reactions and possibly a reconciliation?  Anyway--looking forward to the next installment.

Always,
Margaret

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Luisa
Monday 26th December 2005 22:39


Chapter Two
I really enjoyed your style! And this Dursley is, indeed, completely plausible. I hope he gets to see the truth in the books too, because, like Dumbledore said in book six, the boy suffered severe abuse too. Keep writing!
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Bagelz
Monday 12th December 2005 20:12


3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 133

Chapter Two
What would old Dudders say ... great story, right from the beginning!
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Delfino
Sunday 11th December 2005 16:10


5th year
Num. of Reviews: 238

Chapter Two
Oh, this is wonderful! I loved this chapter the most, I had been waiting for Dudley to see Harry and Ginny together. Amazing job! Please keep writing!
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ReachfulHP88
Friday 9th December 2005 06:24


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 17

Chapter Two

Wow this is an excellent story! What a great idea, I love it from Dudley's POV, it gives the HPuniverse a whole new spin! Update sooooon!!
-Petey

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Hoss
Thursday 8th December 2005 16:59


4th year
Num. of Reviews: 179

Chapter Two
Keep it up please. Thanks
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ohboehm
Thursday 8th December 2005 06:38


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 11

Chapter Two

Dudley is becoming human?  What a wonderful thing!  I am glad that you have dared to take on so difficult a task, and I am truly enjoying your story.  The only additional problem you have (beyond the strains of coming up with the story in the first place) is that now your readers will be pestering you for more...

Please?  Don't stop now?

Thank you for your story!

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PHsname
Wednesday 7th December 2005 23:37


4th year
Num. of Reviews: 161

Chapter Two
now im completely into this story...you've "hooked" me...haha.

cant wait for the next update!!
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Bucktavius
Wednesday 7th December 2005 15:00


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 73

Chapter Two
i'm not entirely sure why i love this story, but i absolutely do!
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Jeni
Wednesday 7th December 2005 07:56


Chapter Two
This is a great story.  I love the way that you have described Dudley and taken him on a road of self reflection.  I cant wait for the next chapter.
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aschowin
Tuesday 6th December 2005 18:12


3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 136

Chapter Two
Very interesting story. I like the way you've had Dudley change, and I want to find out where he goes from here. Great job.
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Tuesday 6th December 2005 06:58


Chapter Two
Hm -- bit of a "fast-forward" through Dudley's
undergrad years & 2 years thereafter, but I gather
that the period wasn't essential to the story at
this stage.  (I expect that the Wizarding World
has had an eventful period, though.)

Dudley is, indeed, plausible here; that's a
non-trivial bit of good work.

And we find an "unexpected encounter," indeed.  I
wonder if Dudley will pursue this & try to find
Harry -- and Ginny?  :-)  Given the title, I have
some suspicions....  :-}

Well done so far!
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Morag Camshron
Tuesday 6th December 2005 06:35


Chapter Two

The fact that you were able to  realistically make Dudley likeable (rather than merely detestable and/or pitiable) is the mark of an excellent writer. Count in another reader who is eagerly awaiting your next update!

 

- Morag Camshron

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sassnfrassgrly
Monday 5th December 2005 22:01


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 5

Chapter Two
i really liked this. please continue soon. well done! cheers!
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Michelle
Monday 5th December 2005 16:30


Chapter Two

Wow. This is great. Is there going to be any more. I do hope so. I really want to see Dudley stick it to his parents, and make ammends with Harry. Maybe even perhaps run into that curly haired girl from school again? Hmmm?

Keep it up. There is just so much more to this story. I can feel it.

 

Michelle

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Simon
Monday 5th December 2005 13:13


Chapter Two
 Awesome, I really enjoy the new angle of approach.  Especially like the description of harry and ginny from the third person, very refreshing.  Even though personally don't like dudley-turn-good stories in general, i like this one a lot. keep it up!
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hewithnoname
Monday 5th December 2005 10:32


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 73

Chapter Two
Well the plot thickens. I like the fact you have gone for a different charactor, very brave. As usuall you have done a fantastic job. Well done. The only thing for me to do know is wait for the next chap.
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Stephanie
Monday 5th December 2005 08:38


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 57

Chapter Two
Very nice story, I'm curious as to what will happen next :). Congrats on being the story of the week!
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Dalf
Monday 5th December 2005 01:24


Chapter Two
  Oh bother!  No more!  Lookinf forward to the next bit.
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