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majolie
Sunday 9th November 2008 17:56
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 476
| Green |
| aww - more sweetness |
| lacyrachil
Friday 8th December 2006 12:13
6th year
Num. of Reviews: 251 | Green |
| You really are a great writer. I truly enjoy your short stories. |
| Prof. McGonagall
Sunday 5th February 2006 20:25
| Green |
| WOW! Very well written! Your words are more powerful than a paintbrush! You understand human nature and emotions exceptionally well and know just how to put them into words so they will go straight to our hearts! I am working my way through all your pieces and can't wait to see more! Please keep writing!!! |
| critmo
Monday 19th December 2005 05:55
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 684 | Green |
| ::Sighs.:: |
| tante
Friday 16th December 2005 11:58
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 169 | Green |
Lovely imagery again! I really enjoy these character studies. I wish my review were as eloquent as your fic. You're now on my update alert list. I'm excited to read more of your ideas. |
| DailyProphetReporting
Friday 16th December 2005 01:04
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 180 | Green |
Lissa, it was wonderful to see your name on the posted list again. I
hope your time away was relaxing, but it's definitely great to have you
back here!
As for the story, I think it's very nicely done considering the
simplicity. The repetition provides a very nice avenue for portraying
Ginny's character and for some lovely imagery.
But it's your ability to pull this off in second person that really
impresses me. That's something most authors would even try (I certainly
wouldn't), yet you bring it off in such a way that it flows naturally
and makes the story feel just a touch more personal. From my
experience, that's a sign of real mastery of the craft.
Anyway, again, it's great to have you back!
-KC
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| Melindaleo
Monday 12th December 2005 07:34
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 455 | Green |
Sniff. Aww, that was great. You know, after HBP and the infamous interview, I was feeling fairly certain that we wouldn't get to see much of Ginny for the first half of book 7. Now, after this talk with Stephen Fry that just aired, I'm not so certain anymore.
She said book 7 leaps right off of 6, and so much of 6 was a set up for 7. Well, much of 6 was Harry's developing feelings for Ginny, so I'm feeling more hopefull than I have so far. This just gave me a little boost in that direction.
Go get 'im, Ginny. |
| graup_hagrid
Sunday 11th December 2005 21:02
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 89 | Green |
Here Here!
Nice little ditty.
Thank you for sharing.
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| Ladybug
Sunday 11th December 2005 16:31
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 375 | Green |
| This is Good (with a captial 'G'). I don't know why, but the overwhelming sense I get from this is honesty - that she is being completely honest with herself in these roaming thoughts. |
| Darker_Rage
Sunday 11th December 2005 15:43
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 5 | Green |
| An excellent piece of work. Daring is the first way I'd describe it;
the way you tell it, as if someone were speaking to Ginny, I've never
seen that before, and you've written it very well. I love the different
meanings of green you've worked in as well, real-world and metaphoric.
I say again, excellent work :)
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| anya
Sunday 11th December 2005 13:27
| Green |
| Beautiful.
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| EJH0904
Sunday 11th December 2005 12:35
3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 123 | Green |
| God, I so loved this! It's so powerful, yet so simple. I adore the fact that you evoke such moving images and emotions in just few short lines of print. Well done, indeed. |
| EvieMarie
Sunday 11th December 2005 12:20
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 80 | Green |
| that was really wonderful, i love your style of writing! |
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