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Sunday 9th November 2008 12:56

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 477

aww - more sweetness
Friday 8th December 2006 07:13

6th year
Num. of Reviews: 251

You really are a great writer. I truly enjoy your short stories.
Prof. McGonagall
Sunday 5th February 2006 15:25

WOW! Very well written! Your words are more powerful than a paintbrush! You understand human nature and emotions exceptionally well and know just how to put them into words so they will go straight to our hearts! I am working my way through all your pieces and can't wait to see more! Please keep writing!!!
Monday 19th December 2005 00:55

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 685

Friday 16th December 2005 06:58

4th year
Num. of Reviews: 169


Lovely imagery again!  I really enjoy these character studies.  I wish my review were as eloquent as your fic.  You're now on my update alert list.  I'm excited to read more of your ideas.

Thursday 15th December 2005 20:04

4th year
Num. of Reviews: 180

Lissa, it was wonderful to see your name on the posted list again. I hope your time away was relaxing, but it's definitely great to have you back here!

As for the story, I think it's very nicely done considering the simplicity. The repetition provides a very nice avenue for portraying Ginny's character and for some lovely imagery.

But it's your ability to pull this off in second person that really impresses me. That's something most authors would even try (I certainly wouldn't), yet you bring it off in such a way that it flows naturally and makes the story feel just a touch more personal. From my experience, that's a sign of real mastery of the craft.

Anyway, again, it's great to have you back!
Monday 12th December 2005 02:34

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 465


Sniff.  Aww, that was great.  You know, after HBP and the infamous interview, I was feeling fairly certain that we wouldn't get to see much of Ginny for the first half of book 7.  Now, after this talk with Stephen Fry that just aired, I'm not so certain anymore.

She said book 7 leaps right off of 6, and so much of 6 was a set up for 7.  Well, much of 6 was Harry's developing feelings for Ginny, so I'm feeling more hopefull than I have so far.  This just gave me a little boost in that direction.

Go get 'im, Ginny.

Sunday 11th December 2005 16:02

2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 89

Here Here!

Nice little ditty.

Thank you for sharing.
Sunday 11th December 2005 11:31

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 375

This is Good  (with a captial 'G'). I don't know why, but the overwhelming sense I get from this is honesty - that she is being completely honest with herself in these roaming thoughts.
Sunday 11th December 2005 10:43

1st year
Num. of Reviews: 5

An excellent piece of work. Daring is the first way I'd describe it; the way you tell it, as if someone were speaking to Ginny, I've never seen that before, and you've written it very well. I love the different meanings of green you've worked in as well, real-world and metaphoric. I say again, excellent work :)
Sunday 11th December 2005 08:27

Sunday 11th December 2005 07:35

3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 123

God, I so loved this!  It's so powerful, yet so simple.  I adore the fact that you evoke such moving images and emotions in just few short lines of print.  Well done, indeed.
Sunday 11th December 2005 07:20

2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 80

that was really wonderful, i love your style of writing!
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