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gymnastgal19
Wednesday 31st October 2007 15:49
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2461
| Gingerbread House |
bahahahaha!!!! I loved this!!! It was awesome and ingenuis!!!!!!!!!
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| MissPenny45
Saturday 4th March 2006 21:05
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 17 | Gingerbread House |
| well I do believe ive read this story on sugerquill... im guessing your the same person? |
Mr Flying Fingers
Monday 6th March 2006 11:22 | Gingerbread House (Author Response) |
| Yes, ma'am. I am who I am, both here and there. |
| MissPenny45
Saturday 4th March 2006 21:05
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 17 | Gingerbread House |
well I do believe ive read this story on sugerquill... im guessing your the same person?.gif) |
| critmo
Monday 19th December 2005 04:59
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 684 | Gingerbread House |
| So, I was right. Ginny had a suspicion in the second chapter of "Per Aspera Ad Astra". |
| tonks442
Monday 19th December 2005 00:09
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 34 | Gingerbread House |
| Too cute! Great job!
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| PHsname
Friday 16th December 2005 16:29
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 161 | Gingerbread House |
LOL
very cute...very funny.
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| jeanne
Friday 16th December 2005 12:01
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 508 | Gingerbread House |
| I loved it.Very topical.Merry Christmas to you and yours. |
| Pugpal
Friday 16th December 2005 11:10
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 162 | Gingerbread House |
| LOL! Oh that was good!! At the moment I'm laughing so hard I'm about to fall off the computer chair! Great job! I love it! |
| Evelyn
Thursday 15th December 2005 06:27
| Gingerbread House |
Normally, I don't like the story of Hänsel and Gretel, but your version had me laughing out loud! I suppose it was the Germans' accant that did it... Just one little correction, though: Living in Germany myself, I know that they rather say "zat" instead of "dat" when they mean to say "that" - or did you want to mix "that" and "das"...?
Enough of that . ;-) I really liked reading about the twins again since they don't much appear in canon any more. Und wenn sie nicht gestorben sind, dann leben sie noch heute...
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| Ladybug
Wednesday 14th December 2005 04:16
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 375 | Gingerbread House |
Superb! I can picture the children perfectly and hear their voices very clearly - great job, very entertaining. Thanks for that Christmas treat! |
| Astrid
Tuesday 13th December 2005 22:40
7th year
Num. of Reviews: 336 | Gingerbread House |
| I always knew those two kids were spoiled brats! |
| Kelleypen
Tuesday 13th December 2005 21:42
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 416 | Gingerbread House |
Something weird is going on in the second paragraph--a bit redundant: a family from Germany had just moved from Germany, and jumped to jump. I think that paragraph got the hiccoughs. 
But I still love this fic. I laughed all over again and your additions were just right. Thank you for this bit of holiday humor. -Kelley |
Mr Flying Fingers
Tuesday 13th December 2005 21:47 | Gingerbread House (Author Response) |
Something weird is going on in the second paragraph--a bit redundant: a family from Germany had just moved from Germany, and jumped to jump. I think that paragraph got the hiccoughs.
But I still love this fic. I laughed all over again and your additions were just right. Thank you for this bit of holiday humor. -Kelley
K, thanks for the review and the motivation...and, yeah, I've been battling revision issues. I'll have to change my procedures next time around. |
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