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gymnastgal19
Tuesday 30th October 2007 19:47


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2461

Remember
wow!!!!! I take it that harry killed voldemort... lol

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pyromain
Friday 10th August 2007 15:37


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 580

Remember
A real nice story wraped around one word "remember".
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Uzamaki-girl
Saturday 9th September 2006 17:00


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 99

Remember
Wonderful.^^
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naomi
Thursday 22nd December 2005 12:32


Remember

that was beautiful

are you going to add another chapter?

from naomi

have a merry christmas

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XXXmister-E werepony unit
Wednesday 21st December 2005 10:55


3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 112

Remember
realy good!is there to be a sequal,or am i unlucky?
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critmo
Monday 19th December 2005 04:46


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 685

Remember
Beautiful. But Harry could've been a little more polite.
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EJH0904
Saturday 17th December 2005 09:21


3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 123

Remember
I love these Post-HBP one-shots! Very nicely done, indeed.
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Arnel
Saturday 17th December 2005 09:16


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 582

Remember
Poor Ginny!  I suppose no news is good news, but the best news of all is his presence.  And with as much as Ginny loves Harry his second request is probably infinitely easier to comply with than the first.  Well done, quite fluffy, slightly angsty, and altogether a good read.  Thanks for sharing.
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Sriram
Saturday 17th December 2005 01:30


Remember
Wow... I'm going to go read all your stories now.

Please keep up the good work.
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jOAN
Friday 16th December 2005 21:15


Remember

Wow! This is very beautiful!!!! I highly recommend reading it while listening to Sarah McLachlan's song "Do what you have to do", from her "Surfacing" cd.

Pulls your heart strings, and and makes them cry!!!

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Harry luvs Gingin
Friday 16th December 2005 19:27


Remember

Wow...i've seen good starts to storys, but this one is goooodd!! I ma very impressed with the tone of the characters... I can't wait for the next chapter!!!! It would be a nice Christmas Gift  ;-)  4 ever!!! Harry is so hcut(hot heh heh)

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juliet
Friday 16th December 2005 19:09


7th year
Num. of Reviews: 303

Remember
I am absolutely speechless, but I will give it a go!  This was so simple, yet so powerful.  It has taken my breath away - well done.
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blankxinxthexmind
Friday 16th December 2005 16:18


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 5

Remember
Wonderful! It's amazing how you can keep everything so vague and yet, we get it. I'm loving this story!
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WeirdSisters
Friday 16th December 2005 13:29


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 1

Remember
This story is so sweet and so well written!  I hope you write more stories.  I loved it and can't wait to read more!
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tante
Friday 16th December 2005 11:52


4th year
Num. of Reviews: 169

Remember
Amen to all the the reviews below and I must whole-heartedly agree with Ladybug's astute comments.  You have a knack for setting up a scene beautifully.  The way you craft sentences is particularly effective in drawing the reader into your story and making her/him feel part of the scene at hand.  I can feel it, see it & hear it.  You create a vivid image, without resorting to paragraphs of heavy-handed description.  I look forward to much more!  Brava!   
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Friday 16th December 2005 11:40


Remember
aww thats so sweet...i loved it!
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tta
Friday 16th December 2005 04:59


Remember
Very nice. Ginny's well written and I like her conversations with Harry. The ending was particularly good.
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PHsname
Thursday 15th December 2005 23:09


4th year
Num. of Reviews: 161

Remember
wow...

just...yeah...wow.

very beautifully written, and surprisingly moving chapter.

the ending was perfect...haha.

great job!!
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Ladybug
Thursday 15th December 2005 21:31


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 375

Remember
Perfect. I like your use of repetition - three piles of presents, three places at the table, etc , and then understanding didn't ... - they were very effective in building her sense of waiting and hoping. I also love the practical details ( A bad mood was poor reason to risk frostbite. ) which made it so much more realistic and not just an emotional trip. Those practical details made the emotive words so much more powerful, i.e. this sentence - Her memories were blurred around the edges and the echo of their voices grew softer by the day. - was so much more meaningful and powerful in the story than it was on its own in the summary. Love the twist in the end - the whole piece was about remembering until he needed to forget - wonderful!
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aschowin
Thursday 15th December 2005 21:09


3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 136

Remember
I liked this story, it has a somber tone, which carries well with Harry's return from battle. Good Job.
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