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Tuesday 30th January 2007 09:30

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 1396

1: The New Mission
Severus got off easy. Why would Voldemort not punish him?
I like how you have Bella getting in Snape's face, so to speak.
Friday 26th January 2007 09:51

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 406

1: The New Mission
Oooh, I like it. We all love to hate Snape, but this is so very plausible...the idea that Dumbledore knew and was ready to die for things to keep going and all that. I'm off to read more!
Thursday 25th January 2007 13:15

1st year
Num. of Reviews: 5

1: The New Mission
This sounds oddly like the first chapter of my story, haha. I hate that. But it's very well done and the conversation is very believable! Good job! Best wishes, Sunny
Thursday 4th January 2007 22:24

1st year
Num. of Reviews: 6

1: The New Mission
Wow this was a great beginning. I can't wait to read more.
Tuesday 11th July 2006 18:54

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 1230

1: The New Mission
Okay. That was a very good start. Did they go to Number 12?
Friday 12th May 2006 15:12

1: The New Mission
MORE MORE !!!!!! this is wonderful keep on writing this is so good
Friday 14th April 2006 17:07

4th year
Num. of Reviews: 173

1: The New Mission
Loved this chapter. You are a really talented writer and I hope to read a lot more from you! So far it has been a great story.

Tuesday 7th February 2006 10:14

3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 127

1: The New Mission
Good grammar and nice dialog make me a happy reader. A reformed Snape sticks in my craw though.
Monday 16th January 2006 13:09

2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 97

1: The New Mission
great start ... you make it sound that snape isn't such a git, but stilll that he is one ...( i'm not sure you can make out what I'm saying ... sorry) GReat
Saturday 14th January 2006 23:03

Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 375

1: The New Mission

Wonderful start! This is a very believable and seamless follow on from HBP. There are some great lines here, especially

"... You have made your allegiances perfectly clear.” “Does that mean yours are not?”

This reminds me of the opening chapters of all the books when something is set up that will come back in a big way at the end.

Great work! Right, now I will eagerly read on...


Monday 2nd January 2006 08:12

1: The New Mission

Very good! But I still don't understand if Snape is Good ord Evil...

Monday 26th December 2005 19:27

1: The New Mission
OoOoOoO this is the first post-HBP fic i've read because I didnt think any of them would be awesome but... this is awesome!!!
Thursday 29th December 2005 11:08
1: The New Mission (Author Response)
Thanks you for the praise and the review :)
Heather Rushton
Monday 26th December 2005 16:59

1: The New Mission

Dear logicalraven,

I absolutly love your story it is so captivating i can only hope you write another chapter to your amazing story

~Minerva McGonagle

Thursday 29th December 2005 11:08
1: The New Mission (Author Response)
Thanks you so much for your review. Another chapter should be up soon :)
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