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D.A.D.A.chik
Tuesday 4th March 2008 16:19
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 93
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| oh my gosh! thats amazing, yet so sad. im actually crying! |
| D.A.D.A.chik
Tuesday 4th March 2008 16:19
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 93 | 1 |
| oh my gosh! thats amazing, yet so sad. im actually crying! |
| gymnastgal19
Friday 26th October 2007 09:08
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2461 | 1 |
wow!!! This must have been really hard to write and i think that you did a good job with it!!!
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| firestar
Monday 6th August 2007 08:03
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 3 | 1 |
This story is exceotional. So beautifully written and so heart-breaking.
I've been in a similar situation, though I was the one who had children and watched while my sister tried and tried. She and her husband went through everything you have described above.
Congratulations on writing this. It isn't soppy and it isn't angst ridden, but honest and truthful. I feel so bad for your Ron and Hermione. |
| scarlett
Friday 30th December 2005 02:40
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This is something that can effect everyone, and your story tells of someone who is magic and to me, magic could solve everything. But it can't, which is sad. Please keep writing at this level, its fantastic to escape in your writing . |
MagnoliaMama
Saturday 31st December 2005 12:18 | 1 (Author Response) |
| Yes, magic's inability to solve all life's problems was one of the issues I most wanted to tackle. I'm glad you enjoyed this. Thank you so much for your review.
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| emma
Tuesday 27th December 2005 21:12
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| Hey Magnolia Mama!
this is emma once again, i referred your story to my friends and they love it, i dont think you remember me, i asked about your L.J. on ronandhermione.net. BUT if you do, i might be getting myself a live journal, ive been reading and writing fanfiction for a while now, i guess i should eventually get a LJ account...oh well, well so much for creeping you out...keep up the EXCELLENT work, ive read some more of your work and i must say, some of the best ive ever seen. |
| Jner
Monday 26th December 2005 23:50
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 59 | 1 |
| Very well done, as always. You never cease to amaze me. Bravo! |
MagnoliaMama
Wednesday 28th December 2005 07:14 | 1 (Author Response) |
 Thank you so much! |
| parakletos
Sunday 25th December 2005 10:10
5th year
Num. of Reviews: 209 | 1 |
First let me say that this is well written. It would be easy for you to
just play on the natural emotions that the subject matter stirs but you
avoided that. The way you described the emotions of the characters drew
me in to the point where felt helpless just reading and wanted to be
able to reach out and do something.
I look forward (?) to reading the second part.
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MagnoliaMama
Monday 26th December 2005 19:52 | 1 (Author Response) |
| Thank you so much for your thoughtful review. It was absolutely essential I not let the emotions take control of the story, but it wasn't easy, I can tell you that. Part two, I can assure you, is not quite as heavy as this part, though I make no promises about a happy ending.
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| Mr Flibble
Saturday 24th December 2005 16:15
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 19 | 1 |
depressing reading on christmas morning...
well written tho
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MagnoliaMama
Monday 26th December 2005 19:50 | 1 (Author Response) |
Well, it's not as though you weren't warned...  Thanks for reviewing!
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| Wild Magelet
Friday 23rd December 2005 23:54
3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 115 | 1 |
A close friend of my mother's has gone through a similar thing year in and year out, and I know it's heartbreaking for her and many women. My mother had two miscarriages; my grandmother gave birth to her first baby knowing that it was stillborn. This definitely struck a chord with me. I only hope it isn't something I have to experience first-hand. Wonderful job depicting the emotions of all involved. It's difficult but a positive thing, I think, that fanfiction is used as a forum for the more serious subjects in life.
Despite the sombreness of this, however, I'm going to wish a you a Happy Christmas anyway! |
MagnoliaMama
Monday 26th December 2005 19:49 | 1 (Author Response) |
Thank you for taking the time to write such a personal and heartfelt review. I've heard from many women (and a few men) who've faced similar struggles as Ron and Hermione do in this story, and all of them -- and now you as well -- have touched me deeply with the way they've felt compelled to open up about what is a profoundly personal issue. I'm so honored to hear that my story moved you.
A belated merry Christmas to you as well! 
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| EmeraldPrincess
Friday 23rd December 2005 09:56
3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 131 | 1 |
So there will never be a baby? Never? Unless they want a 'defected' baby? Or a premature one?
Well that was very well written, despite the fact that it was very sad... |
MagnoliaMama
Monday 26th December 2005 19:47 | 1 (Author Response) |
| You'll have to read the next part to see what happens. There are a variety of choices for couples faced with this sort of situation, and not all of them involve taking the sort of risks Hermione and Ron are faced with. Thanks for taking the time to review.
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| paladin
Thursday 22nd December 2005 19:33
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 159 | 1 |
This
is a really great story. I have family of my own who have been
through this situation and that pain can only be imagined. You
did a great job of exuding this part of real life through the HP
venue. It's interesting how messages can be conveyed today.
Peace be with you. And keep on writing.
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MagnoliaMama
Monday 26th December 2005 19:45 | 1 (Author Response) |
| Oh wow, thank you for such a heartfelt review. I'm honored I was able to touch you in this way with my story.
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| Gioia
Thursday 22nd December 2005 19:18
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 54 | 1 |
| This was a fantastic, gripping story about a miserable, miserable
journey. Thanks for sharing and for using your talent in such a
therapeutic way.
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MagnoliaMama
Monday 26th December 2005 19:44 | 1 (Author Response) |
| Thank you so much for such a kind and generous review.
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| Phantasia
Thursday 22nd December 2005 19:07
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 4 | 1 |
That was great. Please keep writing. |
MagnoliaMama
Monday 26th December 2005 19:44 | 1 (Author Response) |
| Thank you, I certainly intend to.
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| Fuzzysock24
Thursday 22nd December 2005 19:06
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 1 | 1 |
There are no words to describe this. I cried so hard and my heart still aches. Your ability to capture that much sorrow is amazing and heart wrenching. |
MagnoliaMama
Monday 26th December 2005 19:44 | 1 (Author Response) |
Oh, I'm so sorry I made you cry.  I promise the next part won't be quite so hard to read.
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| EJH0904
Thursday 22nd December 2005 17:23
3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 123 | 1 |
I want to express through my tears just how incredibly moving your first chapter was. It was so real that it actually leaves me aching inside. It was true and painfully beautiful. Can't wait for the final chapter. |
MagnoliaMama
Monday 26th December 2005 19:42 | 1 (Author Response) |
Yikes. Thank you, but I'm sorry for causing you such distress.  The next bit isn't quite so wrenching, I promise.
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| kensai
Thursday 22nd December 2005 14:10
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 67 | 1 |
| very powerful |
MagnoliaMama
Monday 26th December 2005 19:41 | 1 (Author Response) |
| Thank you.
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| Hank
Thursday 22nd December 2005 11:33
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 157 | 1 |
| You definitely hit the nail on its head... This is almost scary in its realism. What's even scarier - the worst is yet to come. Excellent piece of work. |
MagnoliaMama
Monday 26th December 2005 19:41 | 1 (Author Response) |
| Thank you so much. Realism was what I was most interested in achieving, so thank you for the affirmation.
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| Musings
Thursday 22nd December 2005 09:36
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 97 | 1 |
| I am a weeping mess. This is just amazing, MM -- thank you for sharing this heartwrenching look into Ron and Hermione's lives! |
MagnoliaMama
Monday 26th December 2005 19:40 | 1 (Author Response) |
Oh, dear.  I can't promise you a happy ending, but things will improve for them before all is said and done.
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