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Arnel
Thursday 22nd December 2005 16:55


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 648

Destiny Demanded

Wow!  This is powerful stuff!  I'm sitting here, having read your poem twice, with chills going up and down my spine.  The imagry in your words describes Harry and his feelings beautifully, succinctly.  My favorite section was Section III, the one describing the six who went to the Ministry of Magic.  I love how you see their individual personality traits coming together to bolster Harry. 

By the way, if you don't like how the server formatted your work, have your beta edit in a manual line-break at the end of each line by pushing "Shift-Enter" at the end of each line.  That eliminates the extra space between  lines forced by using just "Enter".

This poem is worth reading over and over.  I'm going back to read it a third time.

 

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gemz1313
Thursday 22nd December 2005 10:07


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 57

Destiny Demanded
It was very differnt, but very good, brilliant. I can't think of words to describe it, but i thought it was brilliant, and very well written. Well done.
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