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Thursday 22nd December 2005 21:55
Num. of Reviews: 576
Wow! This is powerful stuff! I'm sitting here, having read your poem twice, with chills going up and down my spine. The imagry in your words describes Harry and his feelings beautifully, succinctly. My favorite section was Section III, the one describing the six who went to the Ministry of Magic. I love how you see their individual personality traits coming together to bolster Harry.
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This poem is worth reading over and over. I'm going back to read it a third time.
Thursday 22nd December 2005 15:07
Num. of Reviews: 57
|It was very differnt, but very good, brilliant. I can't think of words to describe it, but i thought it was brilliant, and very well written. Well done.
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