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bleeblahblee
Tuesday 6th April 2010 02:27


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 55

1: An Arrival and a Departure
interesting... well I didn't like Fudge anyway.
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Wooster
Saturday 8th July 2006 13:34


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 525

1: An Arrival and a Departure
Yep. You're right. The fact that you killed Fudge first gives you a sort of...I dunno...let's call it 'angry-fan immunity'.



Still amazing writing. One question...have your page dividers not been working? That happens to me sometimes and I noticed your story sometimes jumps oddly to another subject with no transition...

Gridley
Monday 17th July 2006 01:38
1: An Arrival and a Departure (Author Response)
No, that's more a weakness of my writing style. I cut very quickly from one thing to another. Over time I feel that I've been fleshing out more and chopping less, but its a slow process at best.
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Kelleypen
Thursday 18th November 2004 18:40


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 416

1: An Arrival and a Departure
yeah, fudge has gotta go. I think Percy's time is limited too. I liked everything except the abrupt way you moved from Harry to fudge. You write very nice fics. Kelley
Gridley
Thursday 18th November 2004 22:49
1: An Arrival and a Departure (Author Response)

Again, the abruptness is a weakness I'm working on.

Killing Fudge was one of those nice moments of authorship.

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