Wow. Peter wrote the map. He has good writing and of course he is the only one to know the address. And how did Petunia know they were going there, or was she just randomly giving it to Harry 'cause he is moving out? No madder, it helps. It is very good so far.
Wow. Peter wrote the map. He has good writing and of course he is the only one to know the address. And how did Petunia know they were going there, or was she just randomly giving it to Harry 'cause he is moving out? No madder, it helps. It is very good so far.
Wow. Peter wrote the map. He has good writing and of course he is the only one to know the address. And how did Petunia know they were going there, or was she just randomly giving it to Harry 'cause he is moving out? No madder, it helps. It is very good so far.
A very satisfyingly short visit to the Dursleys! I liked the conversation among the three friends - it sounded very natural, as did the Dursleys' reactions. Ooh, and a chilling little end with the secret-keeper's note - gave me the shivers!
This is an excellent story. I just want you to know that you are doing a great job. But, i have to tell you that Harry and Ron have rode in a taxi before. If you read in The Goblet of Fire Chapter Eleven pg 162 ( american version )
....' Mrs. Weasleyhad braved the telephonein the village post officeto order three ordinary Muggle taxis to take them into London.'
Still a good story though. I can't wait for the next chappie.
that was REALLY good
and 
BETTER GET BACK TOGETHER and
and
better get together 