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GinevraMollyWeasley
Saturday 31st January 2009 08:59
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 67
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Loved it!  |
| gymnastgal19
Thursday 21st August 2008 09:48
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2461 | One Step Closer to Heaven |
hehe nice story 
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| haileythefan
Tuesday 18th September 2007 17:34
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 26 | One Step Closer to Heaven |
| This is a great srory i wish there was more lily/james fics in the world though |
| hahaheeheehaha
Friday 6th April 2007 05:47
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 49 | One Step Closer to Heaven |
aww poor jamesy stuck in the hospital wing on valentines day . it sounds like theres an interesting backstory that i wish i could read (not so subtle hint there)
it is a great story though so thank you for writing it! |
| Aqua Fountain*
Thursday 1st March 2007 03:20
3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 132 | One Step Closer to Heaven |
| That's sweet. Great job |
| daniel_r_crazy22
Wednesday 24th May 2006 17:00
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 1230 | One Step Closer to Heaven |
| that was cool. nice work |
| daniel_r_crazy22
Wednesday 24th May 2006 16:59
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 1230 | One Step Closer to Heaven |
| that was cool. nice work |
| ImmortalPhoenix
Thursday 2nd March 2006 17:38
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 173 | One Step Closer to Heaven |
WOW! I don't usually read Lily and James stories but this one was awesome. I couldn't stop reading even when my mom called me for dinner about 5 minutes in. Great work.
 Kortnee |
Bring and Fly
Thursday 16th March 2006 02:56 | One Step Closer to Heaven (Author Response) |
| LOL! Thanks Kortnee, I love your enthusiasm, and am delighted you kep reading. I hope you didn't get into trouble though. |
| margot
Monday 27th February 2006 20:05
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| I should have know this was yours (in fact it crossed my mind) because I absolutely loved it! Read it three times actually. The characterizations, the phrasing, the vocab, the clever plot. Just brilliant! |
Bring and Fly
Thursday 2nd March 2006 03:31 | One Step Closer to Heaven (Author Response) |
| Thank you very much, Margot --for this review and the more detailed email! I'm always happy to hear your thoughts on things I write, and you made some excellent points in your email. I appreciate your feedback. |
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Friday 24th February 2006 16:37
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| MissPenny45
Saturday 18th February 2006 18:49
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 17 | One Step Closer to Heaven |
| aww that was really good! |
Bring and Fly
Thursday 16th March 2006 02:57 | One Step Closer to Heaven (Author Response) |
| Thank you very much, Miss Penny! |
| Summer Daisy
Thursday 16th February 2006 15:54
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 32 | One Step Closer to Heaven |
Awww, that was a really sweet fic! James is such a sweetheart! I want him!
**sighs**
I'd really like to read more of this actually. **smiles**
xxx |
Bring and Fly
Thursday 16th March 2006 03:00 | One Step Closer to Heaven (Author Response) |
| Thank you muchly, Summer Daisy. I'd really like to read more of this actually. Well, you never know... I seem to be dabbling with the marauders and J/L at lot more recently. |
| lucky_black_cat
Thursday 16th February 2006 09:20
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 13 | One Step Closer to Heaven |
| Great story, Baffy! It was really sweet, and you pictured the Marauders perfectly, it was really funny. Keep up the good writing, you've got talent. |
| cwarbeck
Saturday 11th February 2006 05:15
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 64 | One Step Closer to Heaven |
| really good story. you seem to have the characters pegged perfectly. hope you write more J/L stories. |
Bring and Fly
Thursday 16th February 2006 06:36 | One Step Closer to Heaven (Author Response) |
| Thank you Cwarbeck. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Hope you write more J/L stories. Well, you never know... I'm at the mercy of my plot-bunnyitis, so we'll see. |
| Ladybug
Friday 10th February 2006 01:43
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 375 | One Step Closer to Heaven |
Great! I really enjoyed this, especially Slughorn playing matchmaker and Snape making a fuss and Sirius's gaggle of giggling hair-flickers  and lovely Lily and James. Very sweet.
Oh, and I'm dying to know - how many Death Eaters does it take? |
Bring and Fly
Thursday 16th February 2006 06:33 | One Step Closer to Heaven (Author Response) |
Thank you Ladybug. I'm very happy that you enjoyed it and picked up on some of my favourite bits too!
I was *so* hoping someone would ask, so thank you! How many Death Eaters does it take to tile a bathroom?
Well, it depends how thin you slice them! (And now you may groan, go 'eww' or guffaw. ) |
| aschowin
Thursday 9th February 2006 00:35
3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 136 | One Step Closer to Heaven |
| Great story. You did an excellent job of integrating what we know about these characters into your story, to tell a truly wonderful tale. I think you really portrayed their personalities well. Great job. |
Bring and Fly
Thursday 16th February 2006 06:28 | One Step Closer to Heaven (Author Response) |
| Thank you Aschowin. I'm glad you enjoyed the story and the characterisations. |
| levotatingT
Wednesday 8th February 2006 11:15
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 187 | One Step Closer to Heaven |
This is awsome!!! I love it, I really don't have any suggestions, except keep writing
levotatingT |
Bring and Fly
Thursday 16th February 2006 06:27 | One Step Closer to Heaven (Author Response) |
| Thank you LevotatingT! I shall do my best to keep writing. |
| Astrid
Tuesday 7th February 2006 16:19
7th year
Num. of Reviews: 336 | One Step Closer to Heaven |
| Oh my goodness, this is amazing! I love the contrast between fluff and more serious tones. James's concern for his friends and family is so him. Good work!! |
Bring and Fly
Thursday 16th February 2006 06:25 | One Step Closer to Heaven (Author Response) |
| Thank you very much Astrid. I'm glad you enjoyed it and paused to leave me a review! |
| Delfino
Tuesday 7th February 2006 14:29
5th year
Num. of Reviews: 238 | One Step Closer to Heaven |
| Oh...wow!! I absolutely ADORED this!! Great, great job! A lot of times, writers don't capture the marauders and Lily very well. But you did an absolutely wonderful job. I loved it!! My favorite part was in the morning, with the realization of Dragonpox. I'm glad you put in a few 'darker' parts in it, having to do with James' family. It made the story more realistic. This is perfect, I love it. Perfect ending! |
Bring and Fly
Thursday 16th February 2006 06:24 | One Step Closer to Heaven (Author Response) |
| Thank you Delfino. I think I must be visible in the dark now, I'm glowing so much after your lovely review! I'm glad you liked the hints of darkness I suggested; as Hagrid told Harry, they were 'dark days --didn't know who ter trust'. I felt unmitigated fluff would be wrong for this era, but they had their moments too! |
| Hank
Tuesday 7th February 2006 10:48
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 157 | One Step Closer to Heaven |
| This was a truly cool fic. I love the interaction of James and Lily - it is exactly as I imagine them myself. I also love how James and Sirius play off each other. Very well done! |
Bring and Fly
Thursday 16th February 2006 06:20 | One Step Closer to Heaven (Author Response) |
| Thank you very much, Hank. I bet the marauders were holy terrors in their day, being intelligent, quick-witted and puckish! |
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