Really loved the story,it was amazing, fantastic, You're really a great writer and you keeped me hooked till the very end. Thanks for writing it, I've enjoyed it very much and I'm thinking about continue reading your stories. By the way, I'm Argentinian.
Román Feal.
great story, i still think about it, even though i read it a while ago. 5/5, deserves to be the #1 fanfic, and i am sure it will stay as the #1 for quite some time.
When I ran across the app wattpad for my blackberry, I had no idea I was in for such a treat. When I saw the Harry Potter stories, I was like okay, I'll see what this is all about. The first few that I read were disappointing because Harry had become almost mean in one of them. Then I decided to read this one....I absolutely love it. I have only read the first 10 chapters but I am totally engrossed in this book. I cannot wait to see what will happen. You are a gifted writer and once I figure out how to really navigate this site and the harry potter fan fiction, I am sure I will read more of your work. Well, I thought I would take a few moments to share with you. I am a teacher so I will be giving you my two cents as I read. lol Thanks for keeping Harry going....I really do love him and all that he stands for. I have to admit, I was mad at JK when Dumbledore died. I vowed that I would not even read the last book, but you know I was there at midnight with my prepurchased voucher, and I had it finished by midnight the following night. Take care and happy writing.....
Melindaleo Friday 29th May 2009 06:01
1: Secrets Unravelled (Author Response)
Welcome to the addicting world of fanfiction! There's a lot of junk out there - but there's a lot of good stuff as well - particularly on this site, in my opinion anyway.
I wrote this one to help me pass the time waiting for the 7th book. I was in line at midnight, too. I so wanted it to come, to know the real end and how it all turned out, but now I'd give anything to go back to waiting for another book. I miss it.
These were my guesses - I got some right, some wrong, but I did enjoy this story's fifteen minutes. Thanks for taking the time to review. I hope you enjoy the rest.
I LOVED it! I read it before DH, and I loved it back then, it kept me going... And I read after DH and I still loved it. This is one hella piece! Really great job done. I wish I could write fanfiction like that
I wouldn't have minded if this WAS DH. Really.
Much Love =)
I read this story months ago but just joined and I just HAD to review this for you. This story is so amazing. you have a real knack for writting. I have told many of my friends to read this story. Every time someone tells me they love the Harry Potter Series I tell them that they have to read this story. Amazing... that's all I can say.
This story was incredible. You have caught the essence of JK Rowling. I am still trying to figure out if you are JK Rowling. I first read this story right befor DH came out and I found it again over the weekend. The emotions that are in this book are tremendous. If you start putting full novels out please let me know so I can purchase them tcconrado@embarqmail.com
Hey, like others have said already, when comparing both, your stroy has so many things alike to JKR's one, it is like you can perform legilimency on her... I am so impressed. well done. I created this account just so i could congratulate you.
I loved this so much better than the real one! i am now reading it for the 2nd time and have been reading solid all day so far. i\'m up to page 469 tonight. And loving it! The Plot, pacing, and character interactions are all alot better. i can\' t wait to read some of your other works!
I loved this so much better than the real one! i am now reading it for the 2nd time and have been reading solid all day so far. i\'m up to page 469 tonight. And loving it! The Plot, pacing, and character interactions are all alot better. i can\' t wait to read some of your other works!
Hey, I actually downloaded your book, thinking it's the Deathly Hallows, and read it right through to the end, with that same knowledge. I only realized it's not by J.K Rowling after I had finished. I've GOT to tell you:
That book is a MASTERPIECE!! I'm serious! It had to be the best I've ever read, and I've read quite a lot of famous books. It was so emotionally engaging, throughout the entire story. I know about J.K Rowling's work. YOURS BLOWS HER VERSION AWAY! Especially the part about what kind of things Harry has to do to succeed, and the pressure and maturity that builds upon him until the end.
One part that really blew me away was at the end of the book, in the final battle against Voldemort. WHERE did you come up with such a genius story? This conflict between Love and Hate? How his Love of his friends gives him the power to defeat one who knows only Hate? I was literally in tears when Harry passes into the Locked Room in the Department of Mysteries. This is the room of the mystery of Love, between Life and Death, where there is nothing but the home he's always had, and where he finally meets his parents and loved ones! You have GOT to show Rowling your book! That story is just incredible. Another aspect of how it's so good is the pure intensity of Harry and Ginny's romance. It affected me even more than it would have, since I was actually listening to "Whisper" by Evanescence while reading the final duel between Harry and Voldemort. Listen to that song, and think of the story, every word in its lyrics makes sense.
Melindaleo Saturday 29th March 2008 06:47
1: Secrets Unravelled (Author Response)
Hello. Thanks very much. It thrills me to hear how much you enjoyed it - and you even put music to it. Thanks for letting me know.
i loved this story when i read it before!!! I cant wait to read it again
I find it interesting that dudley has magic in him.... im surprised that JK didnt add that twist....
please add a sequel i finished your harry potter and the power of emotion and its sequel as well... they were just as good as this one!! PLEASE write a sequel i will be so happy if you do
I absolutely LOVED this story. I created an account just to review. I'm going to read Power of Emotion as well as the sequel to it. I am begging you, SEQUEL. This was the greatest story I've ever read and I just can't accept the books being finished. If you would continue your line I would be INCREDIBLE appreciative.
I finished this story and i thought it was fantastic!!! it was really great and i'm glad you wrote it.. i am now reading Harry Potter and the Power of emotion and i'll read the second one after that aswell... thankyou so much for writing these stories they are great and i hope you write more, please reply to this if you can... i only just got an account because i wanted to review your story THANKYOU
please add a sequel i finished your harry potter and the power of emotion and its sequel as well... they were just as good as this one!! PLEASE write a sequel i will be so happy if you do 
