huh... that one part where ginny started crying and saying "I'm such a slag; of course I'm comparing you to the other ten boys I've done this with this week. I'm such a slut..." She began to wail again. Harry had no idea what to say or do, and so he held her close. "Threw myself at you... threw myself at you and I know, I know, I've heard Charlie and Bill and even P-Percy t-t-talking about girls, I know what you m-must think and I'm so bloody scared... You think I'm a bloody hosepipe and a s-sc-scarlet — "
didnt make much sense....
'He wasn't pouring his soul in to you; he was sucking yours out.' -- too right; I glad you're not doing a person is horcrux thing; horcruces are objects
How interesting, Molly isn't going to charge after Ginny and chew her out for being a 'scarlet woman' .
Oh, this chapter made me cry! Beautiful. I love Harry's wish to watch Ginny's hair grow grey. I thought Harry's fears about being a Horcrux, and Ginny's no-nonsense answer, were very well expressed. And Mrs Weasley ... I shed a tear with her.
\"You had better take care of my babies, Harry Potter.\"
Aww! That was adorable. I loved this story - excellent characterization. It was really awesome how you tied everything in together - it wasn\'t all fluff, it wasn\'t all sex, and it wasn\'t all about the Horcruxes. Great job!
Amanda
Antosha Friday 17th March 2006 00:14
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Thanks! We'll be seeing more of Molly--and she won't necessarily be in her cute mode. ;-)
I just read your story. It was very good. Is it going to be a one-shot? Or a full length, year seven story? I hope you continue with it. Thanks for the read.
Antosha Friday 17th March 2006 00:18
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I just read your story. It was very good. Is it going to be a one-shot? Or a full length, year seven story? I hope you continue with it. Thanks for the read.
You're welcome!
In fact, there are four more chapters and an epilogue on there way. It's not a full-blown seventh-year/Horcrux Hunt fic, but it covers a lot of the bases (or at least the ones I was most interested in.)