hmmm...interesting characterization of Petunia, not at all by canon.
Nice part about Harry and his dreams though -- you see his torment but not over the top like some do.
Congratulations on getting archived here! This is looking to be an interesting story. I love Petunia's "a - a walking dead person". You can see she's grasping for a suitable phrase, but can't quite bring herself to say "zombie".
Good luck for all your future chapters,
Sarah
cckeimig Tuesday 4th April 2006 19:43
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Thanks, Sarah! It's about time I got this done, eh? I appreciate all your support!
I love it!! Really though, its mint. I think I like the thought that Aunt Petunia is good, and that Harry isn't perfect in fanfiction [[becuase thats one of the problems I have with it.]
Please, keep it coming. I like the way you write.
gotta love the dragons
cckeimig Tuesday 4th April 2006 19:47
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Thanks for your nice comments. I appreciate you reviewing!
It's the same story that you stopped at the second chapter on SQ.net. You'll make a lot of revision or now you'll go ahead after this first two chapters?
cckeimig Tuesday 4th April 2006 19:46
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Actually, I was frustrated by the revisions I had to make at SQ (just before HBP came out) and went back much closer to my original version. I've six chapters completed, and they've been done since before I posted the first one at SQ. I figured it was about time to dust this fic off and write it the way I like it.
Thanks for noticing!!!
A great first chapter! I'm looking forward to reading more. Your version of Aunt Petunia is interesting. If only she was that nice in cannon! Update soon.
cckeimig Tuesday 4th April 2006 19:48
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Thanks, I will. Next week, I believe, Chapter Two will be submitted. Guess that means I'd better get a little farther along in writing chapter seven, right?
gotta love the dragons