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potters_love_redheads Thursday 18th March 2010 09:53 1st year Num. of Reviews: 34
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Haha! Marvelous hex indeed. I love that Ginny gets the better of that pretentious prat, he needed someone to knock him down a peg |
| DaFalcon Wednesday 2nd August 2006 18:46 5th year Num. of Reviews: 237
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| Hahaha! Loved it. Wonderful missing moment. Absolutely brilliant. Keep up the great work. |
| Bob Jones Monday 24th April 2006 21:23
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Why isn't a story this good posted at Fiction Alley?!?!?! Well, I'm just glad that I happened across your author's page on this site and found such a wonderful story! |
| cckeimig Tuesday 11th April 2006 19:22 Hogwarts alumni Num. of Reviews: 406
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| Very fun missing moment. |
| hermyslilsis Tuesday 11th April 2006 18:33
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That was the best Ginny fanfic I've read in a very long while! Please keep updating! |
| Penny Lane Tuesday 11th April 2006 13:23 1st year Num. of Reviews: 48
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I was just talking about this particular missing moment from canon with a friend the other day and wondering if there were any good fics about it. And lo an behold, Antosha comes through.
You did a creepily good job of making Smith seem really smarmy. He reminded me of a few guys I\'ve encountered myself, which is perhaps why he made me shudder so much. I also liked the detail of Zabini staring at Ginny, especially compared with the way he seemed to be determinedly nonchalant about her in the following canon scenes.
And though it\'s already been said by everyone, I just have to add: \"...as if someone had taken his new puppy away from him\". Aw, poor Harry. I wanted to hug him. |
| critmo Tuesday 11th April 2006 05:23 Hogwarts alumni Num. of Reviews: 684
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| Great story, very amusing, even if Smith seems a little too ambitious, perhaps. Haven't I read this somewhere else before? |
| aschowin Monday 10th April 2006 23:04 3rd year Num. of Reviews: 136
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| Great story. You got me to laugh, which isn't easy; but the way you wrote Ginny's thoughts was really touching, and true to her character. Excellent job. |
| Evelyn Monday 10th April 2006 02:52 7th year Num. of Reviews: 340
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"as if someone had taken his new puppy away from him"
I already laughed the first time this appeared, so the second time was just .. brilliant.
This story is excellent! I'm off to read your other ones... |
| Ladybug Sunday 9th April 2006 23:24 Hogwarts alumni Num. of Reviews: 375
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| I love this sotry - the detail is great, from Smith to Zabini to Slughorn to Dean to Ginny herself - a wonderful rendering of this particular moment. I especially enjoyed Fleur's influence on Ginny's vocabulary - she's not so awful after all, compared with some of the gits on the train! Thanks for this, it's very enjoyable and expertly written! |
| Musings Sunday 9th April 2006 18:49 2nd year Num. of Reviews: 97
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| This is just outstanding! One of the best missing moments I've ever read! I love the way you've written Ginny...I look forward to reading more! Thanks for sharing this with us! |
| willow Sunday 9th April 2006 15:39 4th year Num. of Reviews: 162
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that was fun! i would never have thought to look at that missing moment- good catch!!
plus, loving the stolen puppy look- good visual, can picture it well |
| parakletos Sunday 9th April 2006 13:50 5th year Num. of Reviews: 209
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And Harry. Looking as if she’d stolen his puppy.
Great line and a great fic. |
| yentila22 Sunday 9th April 2006 11:50
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Your story is wonderful. I like the rich details from Ginny's point of view you have added to HBP. I would love to read more of your work |
| bjon66 Sunday 9th April 2006 11:26 1st year Num. of Reviews: 7
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That was a good story... Though i'm not a big fan of ginny, its interesting
through her POV... Can't wait for next chapter... |
| bibliophile20 Sunday 9th April 2006 11:15 1st year Num. of Reviews: 1
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Still a pleasure to read, even for the fifth or sixth time... |
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