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kopfsalat2000
Friday 18th November 2011 15:09
3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 107
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Oh, I like that story! Especially the .gif) episode at the end |
| potters_love_redheads
Thursday 18th March 2010 09:17
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 34 | Rows |
| Lovely! I really liked Hedwig's observations at the end, most charming haha |
| gymnastgal19
Monday 11th August 2008 15:23
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2461 | Rows |
nice story 
i love the ending with hedwig and her thoughts about the whole thing... and that she was smart enough to get them to stop otherwise they would be nesting too soon 
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| Lolipop
Wednesday 28th May 2008 09:00
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 7 | Rows |
| I love the way you've put in Hedwigs piont of view! It is so sweet! |
| The Pharaoh
Monday 5th May 2008 01:00
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 26 | Rows |
| The Hedwig POV at the end there is fantastic, really great. |
Antosha
Monday 5th May 2008 06:18 | Rows (Author Response) |
The Hedwig POV at the end there is fantastic, really great.
Glad you thought so! I enjoyed that....
Ah, Hedwig. :sigh:
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| haileythefan
Sunday 23rd September 2007 17:40
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 26 | Rows |
| This is a very intense story and really engaging good job |
| DebbieO
Saturday 22nd September 2007 18:40
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 79 | Rows |
| I loved Hedwig's perspective in the end particularly. Sweet. |
| Delfino
Friday 17th August 2007 08:41
5th year
Num. of Reviews: 238 | Rows |
| Great! Absolutely great! Hedwig's part in it was the best, it wouldn't have ended any better way. Wonderful job!!! |
| pyromain
Sunday 15th July 2007 09:54
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 580 | Rows |
| This is a great way of getting Harry and Ginny Back on track, I hope JKR does something like this in the next book. We will see in a week if it goes down like this. I for one hope so, Harry does need Ginny. |
| Rhetor
Wednesday 13th June 2007 14:14
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 36 | Rows |
Oh, this is just splendid. I have no idea how I missed it before. Sherry was right about combining the two pieces.
Right now the shift to Hedwig's POV at the end is what really captures my attention -- you nailed it perfectly. I could enumerate the ways in which you nailed it, but my enumeration would be as long as the whole passage. I grinned and chortled out loud and said "brilliant!" and my daughter wanted to know what was going on.
Petunia's change of heart and manner is breathtaking and heartbreaking and actually believable -- if I were writing a scene like that my biggest fear would be that Petunia'd come off false.
As for the train -- one of my best friends married her young man knowing he had cancer that was probably terminal. They had only a year or two together; so it hit me in the gut. |
| Lauberry
Saturday 24th March 2007 08:56
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 15 | Rows |
oh, I love it! My favorite parts were Petunia's shock ("Has he ever shown you a picture of his mother, my sister?... Hmm, do get him to do that.") and Hedwig's POV at the end.
I'm glad you combined the Ginny going and Harry waiting stories into one, they just belong together.
Lauren |
Antosha
Saturday 24th March 2007 09:49 | Rows (Author Response) |
oh, I love it! My favorite parts were Petunia's shock ("Has he ever shown you a picture of his mother, my sister?... Hmm, do get him to do that.") and Hedwig's POV at the end.
I'm glad you combined the Ginny going and Harry waiting stories into one, they just belong together.
Lauren
Thanks so much! The two halves of the story were always meant to be part of the same plot, but I agree—Sheralyn's suggestion that I shuffle the two together really did make for a much better story.
And yeah—the Hedwig bit is my favorite too.  |
| Bridge
Wednesday 16th August 2006 21:13
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| Oh, I really loved that, especially the last bit in Hedwig's pov. I like how she looks at them as owls and talks about nestlings and knows Ginny by her address, it was really cute and original. Well done. |
| DaFalcon
Wednesday 2nd August 2006 18:43
5th year
Num. of Reviews: 237 | Rows |
| Loved it. Especially Hedwig. Very nice touch there. |
| DaFalcon
Wednesday 2nd August 2006 05:21
5th year
Num. of Reviews: 237 | Rows |
| Very nice story. I loved it, especially the ending. Great work. |
| Cendrillon
Friday 2nd June 2006 19:34
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| Oh...my...God, Hedwig's perspective is so hilariously perfect! I love, love, love it. Especially love how Hedwig refers to Harry and Ginny as her boy and his mate. And the bit about her identification of Ginny by full name and address. |
| cckeimig
Monday 15th May 2006 21:18
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 406 | Rows |
| Wonderful! And definitely meant to be "all rolled together" in one chapter. I especially liked the end. Hedwig's pov is so much clearer than we stupid humans allow ourselves to see things... |
| Ladybug
Sunday 30th April 2006 00:41
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 375 | Rows |
| Great story, just beautiful in its detail and emotion and humour. I loved Ginny's little rehearsal in her head just before knocking on Harry's door, but I loved the real thing even more. |
| Bella
Saturday 29th April 2006 21:34
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 77 | Rows |
| Oh, that was...wonderful. Breathtakingly, at some points. The imagery, the detail, the progression - absolutely wonderful. I loved the dualing point of views, the Muggle man at the beginning, Hedwig at the end. It was a perfect blend of humor, tenderness, and sadness all at the same time. Wow. |
| TigerLily8186
Saturday 29th April 2006 16:01
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 97 | Rows |
| heh. That Hedwig pov at the end was funny. The nice Petunia was rather shocking though... |
| hp4-sauce
Monday 24th April 2006 15:03
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 86 | Rows |
It was a great idea to combine these two (related) stories to make one very, very good one.
I do think Ginny understands Harry and his motivations better than just about anyone else (Gowdie's essay on why Harry chose Ginny - which I believe you encouraged her to post on the HP Essays site - is instructive on their connection) and I wonder if she won't show unusual and admirable restraint in Book 7 in keeping her distance from Harry; at least at the beginning.
That said, I like this version a lot. |
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