This was amusing, and so different tone-wise from the first chapter. I like that you don't portray Parvati as a complete airhead. Canon scenes from another perspective are difficult for me to write, but I think you pulled it off nicely.
Poor Cho. Poor Padma. Poor Harry. Poor others, too.
Another wonderful chapter.
And... Swearing by Merlin was a Hogwarts affectation I usually despised. : Oo yes...
Jacynthe Friday 5th May 2006 08:40
2: Animal Magnetism (Author Response)
Thnaks! A happier chapter coming up, I'm glad to say.
This is such a pleasure, pleasure, pleasure to read! It’s absolutely gorgeous and brilliant and I envy you immensely! Please do write some more, anytime, on anything, but just write more!