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pyromain
Sunday 24th June 2007 09:53
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 580
| Letters |
| who would have thought that Lavender would give Ginny advice which is usefull to her. |
Evelyn
Monday 25th June 2007 08:54 | Letters (Author Response) |
Not me, at least not before I wrote this 
Thanks again. |
| Patches
Sunday 29th April 2007 21:00
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 1141 | Letters |
| A melancoly interlude. Poor Ginny. Still in love with Harry and he is with her but she can't dwell on it. So hard to write a letter to her mother. Should she tell the truth or try to be upbeat? Leave it to Lavender to put in a word of wisdom. Who would have thought it? Thanks for writing. I enjoy your little stories. p |
Evelyn
Monday 30th April 2007 00:45 | Letters (Author Response) |
Thanks again; I'm really enjoying following you as you go through my stories  |
| lacyrachil
Thursday 7th December 2006 11:30
6th year
Num. of Reviews: 251 | Letters |
Who'd have thunk it  Lavendar Brown with helpful advice. Good job. |
Evelyn
Thursday 7th December 2006 11:50 | Letters (Author Response) |
| Thanks, you've made my evening! Glad to know someone still reads these stories. |
| itsme07863
Saturday 12th August 2006 11:08
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 77 | Letters |
| ....more???? i liked tho. but i hope u plan on writing more. lol. |
Evelyn
Sunday 13th August 2006 07:02 | Letters (Author Response) |
| Thanks, I am planning on writing more. In fact, I'm doing it right now. |
| daniel_r_crazy22
Wednesday 9th August 2006 14:41
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 1230 | Letters |
| Umm. Okay. It didn't really explain all that much. But the writing itself was very good. |
Evelyn
Wednesday 9th August 2006 16:49 | Letters (Author Response) |
| Yeah, well. *laughs* First try, I guess. |
| daniel_r_crazy22
Wednesday 9th August 2006 14:41
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 1230 | Letters |
| Umm. Okay. It didn't really explain all that much. But the writing itself was very good. |
| daniel_r_crazy22
Wednesday 9th August 2006 14:40
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 1230 | Letters |
| Umm. Okay. It didn't really explain all that much. But the writing itself was very good. |
| Delfino
Wednesday 3rd May 2006 13:31
5th year
Num. of Reviews: 238 | Letters |
| Hmm. I liked it. I was confused, at first, why Crookshanks was with Ginny, so I'm glad you explained it . The conversation between Ginny and Lavender was amusing, although I was a bit confused at the ending. Are you continuing this? Either way, I liked it. Very creative. |
Evelyn
Thursday 4th May 2006 01:49 | Letters (Author Response) |
No, I'm not exactly continuing this, but there are more stories about Ginny to come (and Lavender - I love writing her  ). There's going to be one very soon, actually, which takes place before this little scene.
Thanks for the review. |
| critmo
Sunday 30th April 2006 06:29
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 684 | Letters |
| As some of the others, I like the oveall tone, the details, etc., however it doesn't feel finished, or - to be a little brutal - it could use a little more substance. |
Evelyn
Sunday 30th April 2006 06:47 | Letters (Author Response) |
| Right... I'm posting another story soon - feel free to tell me if it's more substantial. Thanks for reading and reviewing! |
| Astrid
Friday 28th April 2006 13:36
7th year
Num. of Reviews: 336 | Letters |
| Wow, who would've thought Lavendar would have the solution? |
Evelyn
Saturday 29th April 2006 06:56 | Letters (Author Response) |
| Full of surprises, isn't she? Thanks for reviewing. |
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Friday 28th April 2006 10:35
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| Macsr71
Friday 28th April 2006 08:04
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 43 | Letters |
| Not sure I really understand the point here, was this an excercise in writting, if so, well done, good pacing, point of view stays constant, if just an angsty moment ok, if the start of something larger I say go for it as a story about how people learn to really communicate, or communicate without really saying it is always a good read. |
Evelyn
Friday 28th April 2006 12:42 | Letters (Author Response) |
| Uh... Nice sentence. As for the story, I was writing a few short stories about Ginny, so this is one of them. I was trying to understand her character, so it is a bit of a study, if you like. |
| Ladybug
Thursday 27th April 2006 19:16
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 375 | Letters |
Lovely story, Evelyn. I think your pacing is really good, with Ginny alternately staring into the fire and responding to those around her. It’s interesting to see how her mind sways from one side to the other, regarding whether she should be completely honest with her mum or be reassuringly cheerful, depending on the conversation around her.
Poor Ginny, left behind and having to put up with people like Betty and Lavender when all she can think about is her family and closest friends.
This story has a very realistic air about it. Great writing! |
Evelyn
Friday 28th April 2006 07:10 | Letters (Author Response) |
Yes, poor Ginny.
And ladybug, great summary... You have listed everything I wanted to get across.
Thanks! |
| Ima Quidditch Fan
Thursday 27th April 2006 14:14
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 195 | Letters |
| Interesting story. I think you have captured Ginny, and exactly the environment of a shakey Hogwarts opening. Nice job! |
Evelyn
Friday 28th April 2006 07:06 | Letters (Author Response) |
| Thank you! |
| aschowin
Thursday 27th April 2006 14:03
3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 136 | Letters |
| I enjoyed what you wrote. It was an interesting perspective, and you did really well with Ginny's thoughts and personality. I also felt like you cut the story off before the ending though, before you got your point across. It seemed she was conflicted about what she wanted to say, and the reader doesn't see that resolved. The way you ended it was pretty clever, it was just too soon. Anyway, you did a good job, hope to read more soon. |
Evelyn
Friday 28th April 2006 07:06 | Letters (Author Response) |
| I'm hoping to post another story about Ginny quite soon - I hope you'll be satisfied with the ending of that one... Thanks for reading and reviewing. |
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