Ch.1&2 Good opening to an angsty romance while getting ready to chase the horcruxes. There is alot of humor and lightness mixed in with your tension. Dudley and Petun ia supplied some tender moments. Charlie and Tonks are as loveable as ever and gave harry a friendly heads up of the difficult disxussions to come with the twins and then Ginny. I do hope that harry turns around sooner rather than later. I really like it when Ginny gets involved in the horcrux hunt.
I thought this chapter was fun, with all the awkwardness, but it did seem a little rushed, not terribly though. I really enjoyed the conversation with Charlie, and the relationship between Harry, Ron, and Hermione. You did a great job writing this. It will be interesting to see where this strain between Harry and Ginny leads. Can't wait for more, well done.
Excellent tension so far between Harry and Ginny. I think you're doing a great job so far. Especially because there are so many fics about this time period out there. I look forward to the next installment!
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