Ch.1&2 Good opening to an angsty romance while getting ready to chase the horcruxes. There is alot of humor and lightness mixed in with your tension. Dudley and Petun ia supplied some tender moments. Charlie and Tonks are as loveable as ever and gave harry a friendly heads up of the difficult disxussions to come with the twins and then Ginny. I do hope that harry turns around sooner rather than later. I really like it when Ginny gets involved in the horcrux hunt.
'Buy you'll have to watch' -- But you'll . . .
Interesting . . . Charlies seems to be the calmest. Gred and Forge obviously have something planned . Poor Ginny . . . back to her 1st crush awkwardness.
Jai-kun Wednesday 1st November 2006 13:25
Chapter Two (Author Response)
I'd try to pass it off as obscure british slang, but... the fact is, humans are fallable, and spellchecker software doesn't CARE...
I had to tread a fine line with Ginny. I don't want to paint her as a victim, but she can't be completely unaffected either. I hope I can pull it off
I thought this chapter was fun, with all the awkwardness, but it did seem a little rushed, not terribly though. I really enjoyed the conversation with Charlie, and the relationship between Harry, Ron, and Hermione. You did a great job writing this. It will be interesting to see where this strain between Harry and Ginny leads. Can't wait for more, well done.
Excellent tension so far between Harry and Ginny. I think you're doing a great job so far. Especially because there are so many fics about this time period out there. I look forward to the next installment!
. Poor Ginny . . . back to her 1st crush awkwardness.
