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gymnastgal19
Wednesday 3rd October 2007 15:59
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2461
| Stalking |
lol. loved this story, was a little hard to follow at times though. I kinda figured that they might be harry's kids and somehow i just knew that they were searching for frogs lol
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| pyromain
Sunday 1st July 2007 05:43
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 580 | Stalking |
| so funny got tears in my eyes, the kids of and must couse a the trouble the weasleys do and them some for sake. |
| lantis222
Tuesday 23rd January 2007 15:18
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 577 | Stalking |
| That was incredibly cute! I loved it, I can just see Harry doing that. Great Job! |
| Evelyn
Monday 24th July 2006 08:45
7th year
Num. of Reviews: 340 | Stalking |
Hehe, all those numbers were confusing at first. Lovely little story, and very funny too.  |
hewithnoname
Monday 24th July 2006 08:57 | Stalking (Author Response) |
I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I went for the confussing edge, untill I got confussed myself . Once again I thank you.
I am also just writting another fic about this lot, I hope you enjoy that one as well. |
| Connor Landon
Wednesday 31st May 2006 19:39
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 188 | Stalking |
| This is wicked awesome! Ok, I have to admit though, at first, I thought "this is stupid and confusing", but I started comprehending, and liked it! It's so sweet! Harry's a daddy and was stalking frogs with his children! It's really original and great. I love it! |
hewithnoname
Thursday 1st June 2006 02:54 | Stalking (Author Response) |
| Thank you for your review. I always try to go with the original. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I must admit I went for the confusing start, clearly trying to be clever, but their personality's burst forth bless them. Once again thank you. I hope you enjoy more of my fic's. If you do, I look forward to your input. |
| emmamoonpotter
Monday 29th May 2006 13:49
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 68 | Stalking |
What a great one shot.
At first I thought it was the Weasley boys when they were younger, and was pleasantly surprised to see it wasn't. Bravo.
I was completely entertained by this and I'm looking forward to reading it again. |
hewithnoname
Monday 29th May 2006 16:05 | Stalking (Author Response) |
Thanks a lot, it means so much when readers say they enjoyed your work. I also hope you enjoyed my other fic's as well. I also have more coming in the future.
Once again thank you. |
| Ari
Friday 26th May 2006 23:22
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 35 | Stalking |
*laughs*
Way to go HWNN, I almost fell of my chair. A game of commandos is that fun. But putting a frog in his mouth? Urgh.
*decides not to comment about the grammar* you know, I might have to talk to TKP ... |
hewithnoname
Saturday 27th May 2006 04:04 | Stalking (Author Response) |
Fisrtly, thanks for the review.
Secondly, I checked with spell and grammer twice, TKP checked it twice, to my knowledge. I'm sure P.S checked it when they posted it. So I can't see what you are on about. Then again I'm the wrong person to talk to.
Thrirdly, Not so much a flame. more of a wee flicker, I still thank you. |
| jeanne
Friday 26th May 2006 20:24
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 508 | Stalking |
| Absolutely a 100 on a scale of 1 to 10. Much better than a 10. Loved it, and we used to hunt snakes. Just couldn,t get enough of them. Mom didn,t like em though. Wonder why. That was about 60 years ago. |
hewithnoname
Saturday 27th May 2006 03:41 | Stalking (Author Response) |
Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed it. We never found snakes though. I'm sure if we did, we'd all run off screeming like a pack of girls. (The girls would screem slightly more, but thats the law honest.:thumbsup |
| thisgrlrox
Friday 26th May 2006 11:34
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 187 | Stalking |
| You had me until about mid-story. Then I was able to figure out who the hunters were. What a fun read! Nice job! |
hewithnoname
Friday 26th May 2006 11:51 | Stalking (Author Response) |
| Thank you very much,I tried to keep it going longer, but their personality's just sort of burst forth. I hope you didn't figure who the group were though. Thanks for your review. |
| crimson74
Friday 26th May 2006 09:16
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 16 | Stalking |
 Very nicely done! Love the way the kids follow the unspoken rules and all the hand signals. Not to mention the way Harry and Ginny talked to each other so like them. Keep on the writing.  |
hewithnoname
Friday 26th May 2006 11:46 | Stalking (Author Response) |
| Thanks alot. It was fun to get into their world, so to speak. I used a lot of my own memories. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. |
| mullvaney
Friday 26th May 2006 08:32
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| Hee. THis was *very* cute. I was impressed with the way you kept everyone straight; I would have mixed thm up! I can just see them all, wallowing in the frog pond. good imagery, great flow, nicely done! |
hewithnoname
Friday 26th May 2006 11:43 | Stalking (Author Response) |
| Thank you very much. I just wrote them as I saw them, I worte it down , typed it out and sent it to be beta'd all in one night. It was one of those inspiration thingy's. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. |
| Sheyana
Friday 26th May 2006 04:42
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Really great story - I couldn't wait to find out who the people were, and loved the references to 'the real number one', who the others knew was really in control. The story itself is pretty simple - no big explosions, or massive struggle, and I think thats why I like it so much - it's very different to any other fanfic I've read.
I also really liked the way you slowly revealed who each number was...I hope you have written/ are writing more stuff!
~Sheyana |
hewithnoname
Friday 26th May 2006 11:21 | Stalking (Author Response) |
| Thanks alot. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I had trouble thinking of names at first so it was No's1,2,3,4,5 I didn't want to have Ron jr hermione jr etc. Yes I have more fic's just click on my name. I hope you enjoy them. |
| juliet
Friday 26th May 2006 04:13
7th year
Num. of Reviews: 303 | Stalking |
Hence the sometime lively discussions at the dinner table, both Real Number one and Number three tried to out-think each other, and to get their point over. Number�s one, two and four would flee to a more quiet location and batten down the hatches.
For a moment I wondered if this was Hermione and her daughter. It could have fitted, but I was happy to see Harry at the end getting to play with his children. Excellent, had me in stitches laughing.
often to the fact that he was always in restraints. He was a danger to himself and others,
That is a classic. Immediately I pictured a rather fat laughing baby sitting in a highchair, attempting to escape.
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hewithnoname
Friday 26th May 2006 11:18 | Stalking (Author Response) |
| I tried to picture a little Ginny, so one big Ginny and one little Ginny equals thunderclouds. I also pictured Harry as having his childhood with his children, seems fitting really. I'm so glad you liked it. |
| Ladybug
Thursday 25th May 2006 23:56
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 375 | Stalking |
“What was that?” Number one asked.
“I think it was Number four’s bottom,” Oh, my. I am clutching my sides! Bog of eternal stench - Love it! Oh golly, how gorgeous is that! I am totally in love with this little scene and now feel the insane need to go and play in the mud. There I was trying to fit the Weasley kids into Numbers one, two, etc. – but no, it’s a new generation and Ginny is the REAL Number one – haha!!! That’s great! And the supreme Commander in Chief – hilarious. It’s good to see they all know their place. Kew muchly for that sweet muddy fun. |
hewithnoname
Friday 26th May 2006 11:15 | Stalking (Author Response) |
Thanks alot. I had fun writing this down. The real No one, is how my kids describe their mum. Or rather, "Mom's the real boss isn't she dad."
I used my own childhood as a reference. I'm so glad you like it. Once agian thank you. |
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