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gymnastgal19
Monday 3rd March 2008 15:28


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2393

11: Lions and Tigers and…Dragons?
yay!!! Im glad that that horucrux was found and destoryed.... and that they are going home now
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zoemcfoe
Monday 3rd September 2007 21:01


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 1

11: Lions and Tigers and…Dragons?
Absolutely brilliant--your work gives me chills. It's been weeks since the publiction of DH, and I've been in serious Harry Potter withdrawal. Finding this story was like stumbling across another book 7. Thanks so much for the gift... you are an amazing talent, and I wish you all the best in your future writing efforts. I'll look forward to reading any other fanfics of yours, and hope to someday see your work at my local bookstore as well!
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tsujton
Thursday 30th August 2007 14:45


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 59

11: Lions and Tigers and…Dragons?
That was so exciting!
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Gridley
Friday 20th July 2007 14:48


4th year
Num. of Reviews: 160

11: Lions and Tigers and…Dragons?
The lady is indeed supposed to mark her champion. I'm glad you put that in.

Of course, being an SCA nut myself...
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RavenRayne
Wednesday 6th June 2007 10:03


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 1

11: Lions and Tigers and…Dragons?
I love your work and I have read all of it. You must be channeling some of JKR creativity, as this scene seems to be depicted right on the cover of the book!! It is a shame and, I suppose, compliment that people are sending this story around as the real deal. I have made sure to link all of this leaked nonsense back to this site and tell people that you put a disclaimer on EACH page to let them know you are just borrowing the characters and having some fun. Keep writing. I throughly enjoy your righting! Maybe you'll be able to pick up where JRK leaves off.
Melindaleo
Wednesday 6th June 2007 12:01
11: Lions and Tigers and…Dragons? (Author Response)
Oh, thanks so much! Hee - I was a bit stunned when I saw that cover myself, lol.
Thanks so much for spreading the word about the leaked version, I do appreciate that.
There is a site called PotterFicWeekly that does podcasts of certain fics. They are about to start TSH (this weekend, I think). There is a forum where you can post some comments to be discussed in the podcast.
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siobh007
Tuesday 2nd January 2007 07:11


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 97

11: Lions and Tigers and…Dragons?
I've always had a weak spot for dragons..so I guess I won't be very neutral or impartial by saying Hurray!
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lacyrachil
Tuesday 21st November 2006 11:31


6th year
Num. of Reviews: 251

11: Lions and Tigers and…Dragons?
Great chapter. I love the action with a hint of the romance. Great.
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tsujton
Monday 23rd October 2006 17:32


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 59

11: Lions and Tigers and…Dragons?
The broom disappearing- I didn't expect that. And that's why I love your writing!
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simsanta123
Sunday 10th September 2006 22:41


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 3

11: Lions and Tigers and…Dragons?
It is superb!!!!!
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ninkenate
Wednesday 23rd August 2006 07:04


3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 143

11: Lions and Tigers and…Dragons?
Wonderful scene. I love the use of a dragon. And Harry can feel the magic. He needs to tell his friends to keep that to themselves like Moody said. I bet that Muggle man out for a walk was Simmons. Voldy will know now and will be watching them. I wonder what kind of punishment his death Eaters will get for this. I'm glad they're all going back to headquarters but I fear Molly's wrath for them. I hope they can hold up under the pressure especially Hermione. She caved when Harry went to Godrics Hollow; let's hope she doesn't again but she is a different person now. Two thumbs up
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critmo
Saturday 5th August 2006 06:54


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 684

11: Lions and Tigers and…Dragons?
A replay of the first task? - I'm afraid that Ginny got her history right, but you didn't. The Parthenon is a temple with a rectangular layout, it does not have an arena and the roof isn't open, so Harry couldn't possibly "soar into the blue sky". - Quite a lucky stroke that the dragon could eliminate the horcrux ...
Melindaleo
Saturday 5th August 2006 07:57
11: Lions and Tigers and…Dragons? (Author Response)
Here's the link I used for the information and picture of the Parthenon:
http://academic.reed.edu/humanities/110Tech/Parthenon.html

From that photo, I think it would work fine.
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DanAngelus
Thursday 29th June 2006 15:08


3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 133

11: Lions and Tigers and…Dragons?
Aww wow brilliant! Finally got back in to catch up, this was a very well done chapter. Another Horcrux done and dusted.. as they say.. I love your work so far, you really are a talented author and you are fast becoming one of my top favourites!
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Saturday 24th June 2006 09:22


11: Lions and Tigers and…Dragons?

What an exciting chapter! The dragon fight was very well written. One thing though, this sentence,

I'm certain the area is crawling with weasleys," Harry replied. "Hey, I resemble that remark," she said elbowing him in the ribs.


I don't know if this is an insided joke or not, but did you mean to say, I resent that remark?

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graup_hagrid
Tuesday 13th June 2006 18:32


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 89

11: Lions and Tigers and…Dragons?
Wow, Triwizard tournament, part 2.

Good job on this chapter.
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daniel_r_crazy22
Tuesday 13th June 2006 12:12


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 1230

11: Lions and Tigers and…Dragons?
Cool dragon. Nice save by the way to. I loved it!
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Queenraven
Saturday 10th June 2006 11:59


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I never have much to say about your stories except that they are fabulous pieces of fiction.

But now I must point out a mistake....it's the biggest one I have ever seen you make...

In CoS, Ron is clearly shown to know how to pick a lock. On page 28, US paperback, he picks Hedwig's lock to let her out.

I think you need to print a retraction post haste.

BTW, did I mention this story rocks my socks!?
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michele
Tuesday 6th June 2006 22:29


11: Lions and Tigers and…Dragons?
love it love it love it! i have been following this fic for a while now but never got around to posting a review (so sorry!) but i have loved every single chapter of this work and i think you are truly an amazing writer. i read this chapter and found myself thinking that i was reading book seven. you have a wonderful creative knack and i am absolutely thrilled for the next chapter and the chapters to come!!! :-)
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Summer Daisy
Monday 5th June 2006 05:04


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 32

11: Lions and Tigers and…Dragons?
Awesome chapter! I really didn't see the destruction of the Horcrux coming but it was a great idea. Kinda reminded me of Lord of the Rings -- the only way to destroy The Ring of Power was the Crack of Doom (or whatever it was that destroyed it in the end) or from fire from an ancient dragon. So the Horcrux kinda worked like that.

And of course, the twisted side of me somehow likes to see Harry get severely injured. Not sure why. I'm just weird lol! At least Mrs Weasley's maternal instincts towards an injured Harry should override her fury! And the fact that Ginny remains unharmed should also pacify her.

Nice work! xoxox
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Spark Soliton
Sunday 4th June 2006 15:26


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 96

11: Lions and Tigers and…Dragons?
Hi Melindaleo. Yet another belated review I'm afraid, I'll have to see what I can do to reverese this lamentable trend. But now onto the important stuff: the review!

This was a ROCKER of chapter - I mean WOW! This is like the best ever - forget chapter 34 of PoE and chapter 29 of CoD, as good as they are they don't hold a candle to the nail-biting action is this chapter!!! I swear that after I had read the action of this chapter I was thinking that this was up there amongst the best action-scenes I've seen on cinema, like Ob-Wan/Qui-Jin/Darth Maul lightsaber duel in Episode I or the climatic Obi-Wan/Anakin lightsaber fight at the end of episode III - it felt that real and vivid and powerful and fast and furious and tense and WOW, basically. I could write praise-words for a long time and still not be able to convey properly how much I loved the action between Harry and the Dragon - to qoute Ron "Bloody brilliant!"

The whole set up of the chapter, the way you told it made the tension almost palpable and real - a real nailbiter. I think you captured the characters aboslutely spot on and your story-telling rocks like KISS, Iron Maiden, Aerosmith, Rolling Stones and The Who all playing at the same time - unbelievable!!!

Your writing has matured immensly and this is so impressive, so PROFESSIONAL it's scary. If authors like Dan "Da Vinci" Brown can make zillions on other peoples stories I don't see why wouldn't be able to make it as a pro! I would certainly pay to read your books!

Excellent stuff, thanks for writing and sharing this!!!!!!!!!!
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jeanne
Sunday 4th June 2006 06:11


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 497

11: Lions and Tigers and…Dragons?
End of the seat adventures. This was great. I read the shortest horcrux fic[2 chapters], last night. it was the best short fic ever. Yours is the best long fic ever. I await updates anxiously, Thank you for this one. No reply necessary. just know I am enjoying it. J.
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