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gymnastgal19
Tuesday 2nd October 2007 19:31
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2461
| A Mother's Sacrifice |
nice story!  |
| cckeimig
Saturday 10th June 2006 15:27
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 406 | A Mother's Sacrifice |
| Wow. This was a brilliant tear-jerker. I like the nobility of your Molly. |
| Mullvaney
Wednesday 7th June 2006 19:16
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 27 | A Mother's Sacrifice |
Very good, touching story. To me, it seemed to echo the sacrifice his own mother made when he was an infant, I felt like he was addressing Lily, too, when he called Molly 'mum'. You did an excellent job of showing the sense of loss Harry feels every time he loses a loved one 
Good job! |
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Wednesday 7th June 2006 18:26
| A Mother's Sacrifice |
*sniff* look you got me cryingnow. poor poor 
*sniff* 
*cries self to  * |
| thisgrlrox
Monday 5th June 2006 21:45
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 187 | A Mother's Sacrifice |
| :Sniff: That was a wonderful story. I teared up and my heart goes out to Mrs. Weasley. I think you captured her character. I have no doubt she is a strong woman and fierce mum. Nice story. |
Ham
Monday 5th June 2006 22:06 | A Mother's Sacrifice (Author Response) |
| Thank you |
| Connor Landon
Monday 5th June 2006 17:44
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 188 | A Mother's Sacrifice |
| This was beautiful. A tiny bit OOC, but truly beautiful and I really enjoyed it. The story was so sweet and deep it brough tears to my eyes. I could feel Harry's pain and Molly's determination. It was wonderful. You're a great writer and I can't wait to read more from you. |
Ham
Monday 5th June 2006 22:05 | A Mother's Sacrifice (Author Response) |
 Thank you for the kind words.. I'll see what else I can post up here. |
| harry_ginnyphile
Monday 5th June 2006 16:37
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 44 | A Mother's Sacrifice |
| Ye gods, this story ripped me to shreds! Hearing Harry call Molly Weasley "Mum" was just heartwrenching, especially knowing that it was the bittersweet end of it all. A beautifully written, heartfelt little ficlet ... kudos! |
Ham
Monday 5th June 2006 22:04 | A Mother's Sacrifice (Author Response) |
| Thank you.. im glad you liked it |
| Curren
Monday 5th June 2006 11:55
3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 120 | A Mother's Sacrifice |
| eh, not bad, but harry calling mrs weasley 'mum' the whole time feels so weird the whole time. it just doesn't ring true |
Ham
Monday 5th June 2006 12:13 | A Mother's Sacrifice (Author Response) |
| Oh well.. sorry about that... Somehow it seemed to work for me... calling her Mrs Weasley at the time sounded a bit off. |
| Hermione Sohma
Monday 5th June 2006 08:16
| A Mother's Sacrifice |
| wow. this is soooo sad. brought tears to my eyes!! a great work, nontheless. how ever, “I can’t tell you how proud of you I am of you,” , the 'of you' is in there twice. once before the 'i am' and once after. otherwise, it was great!! |
Ham
Monday 5th June 2006 12:12 | A Mother's Sacrifice (Author Response) |
| wow... amazing how things like this always get through without notice.. thanks for pointing it out. |
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Monday 5th June 2006 05:10
| A Mother's Sacrifice |
| Very Sweet |
Ham
Monday 5th June 2006 12:12 | A Mother's Sacrifice (Author Response) |
| thank you |
| Melindaleo
Monday 5th June 2006 04:43
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 455 | A Mother's Sacrifice |
| Sniff. I still love this story, Ham. I love the bond between Harry and Molly, and I could so see her doing something like that for her family. Harry's words at the graveside after it's all over where particularly heartwrenching. I'm delighted to see you here at Phoenix Song. |
Ham
Monday 5th June 2006 05:05 | A Mother's Sacrifice (Author Response) |
Hee! I still maintaion that it only came out good because I dedicated it to you. You are magical  |
| br0wneyedbeauty
Sunday 4th June 2006 21:37
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 2 | A Mother's Sacrifice |
| wow. this story is really heart warming and sad at the same time. how you managed to do that is amazing. this story is VERY well written! |
Ham
Monday 5th June 2006 05:03 | A Mother's Sacrifice (Author Response) |
| Thank you.. sometimes I do manage to get what I want to say across |
| Gioia
Sunday 4th June 2006 21:13
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 54 | A Mother's Sacrifice |
| Fantastic job! I love the epitaph on the tombstone especially - that was perfect! Did you see that somewhere and get inspired to incorporate it so well here, or did you come up with that one yourself? I swear I may request it in my will! ;-) |
Ham
Monday 5th June 2006 05:02 | A Mother's Sacrifice (Author Response) |
| Erm.. glad you liked the epitaph... believe it or not but I actually made that up. I haven't visited all that many graveyards :p |
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