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gymnastgal19
Sunday 14th October 2007 14:15


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2461

Prologue
wow! interesting! nice way to connect the way harry feels now to how he felt in the fifth year!
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crazyredhead
Tuesday 1st August 2006 09:58


4th year
Num. of Reviews: 184

Prologue
this is very good i like it alot but what happen ok back to reading
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daniel_r_crazy22
Tuesday 27th June 2006 14:32


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 1230

Prologue
What do you mean he felt nothing more?
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Shadow Hider
Wednesday 21st June 2006 22:29


3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 123

Prologue
this is a great start, I can't wait to read more
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harry_ginnyphile
Wednesday 21st June 2006 10:44


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 44

Prologue
What an awesome prologue! You've really drawn me in, can't wait to read the rest of the story! I've already added you to my author update list ... brilliant!
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jessy
Wednesday 21st June 2006 09:32


3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 114

Prologue
oh sorry! i thought this was a completed one!
sorry again!
hurry up 4 the next
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jessy
Wednesday 21st June 2006 09:27


3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 114

Prologue
bloody hell! u killed our hero!:
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Milygo
Wednesday 21st June 2006 07:17


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 20

Prologue
That was a really good first chapter. It really drew me in. I can't wait to read more.
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shannon
Tuesday 20th June 2006 19:47


Prologue
Wonderful,absolutely wonderful!!!I love that Harry's actually seriously hurt for once!!!
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thisgrlrox
Tuesday 20th June 2006 19:19


4th year
Num. of Reviews: 187

Prologue
What an intense chapter! I hope eveyone is allright. Ron's goodbye sounded kind of final which makes me cringe. Nicely written chapter. I'm looking forward to reading more.
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Kalarien
Tuesday 20th June 2006 18:00


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 2

Prologue
Thanks! The next bit should be coming soon, so keep an eye out!
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hwimsey
Tuesday 20th June 2006 17:55


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 79

Prologue
I really enjoyed this chapter. You write action incredibly well. Quotes I loved:
the mouth stretched open beyond the limits of the jaw
Just like now, stuck, imprisoned by a body that wouldn’t work, helpless, helpless, helpless...
His lungs felt like fire.

Ah, what happens next? Update soon, I'm sure this is going to continue to be a great story.

Thanks again for the awesome writing.
hwimsey

Kalarien
Thursday 22nd June 2006 16:20
Prologue (Author Response)
I would be remiss if I didn't give musings, my beta, credit for that last one--she added it to help a last minute change to be a little more believable. But I will take credit for the others! Thanks!
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Aniubis
Tuesday 20th June 2006 17:40


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 2

Prologue
Very nice opener. Can't wait for the next.
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