I really enjoyed this chapter. You write action incredibly well. Quotes I loved:
the mouth stretched open beyond the limits of the jaw
Just like now, stuck, imprisoned by a body that wouldn’t work, helpless, helpless, helpless...
His lungs felt like fire.
Ah, what happens next? Update soon, I'm sure this is going to continue to be a great story.
Thanks again for the awesome writing.
Kalarien Thursday 22nd June 2006 16:20
Prologue (Author Response)
I would be remiss if I didn't give musings, my beta, credit for that last one--she added it to help a last minute change to be a little more believable. But I will take credit for the others! Thanks!
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