Review Navigation: Previous Prologue Chapter One Chapter Two Chapter Three Chapter Four Next Show All Showing 1 to 13 of 13 gymnastgal19 Sunday 14th October 2007 10:15 Hogwarts alumni Num. of Reviews: 2461 Prologue wow! interesting! nice way to connect the way harry feels now to how he felt in the fifth year! crazyredhead Tuesday 1st August 2006 05:58 4th year Num. of Reviews: 184 Prologue this is very good i like it alot but what happen ok back to reading
daniel_r_crazy22 Tuesday 27th June 2006 10:32 Hogwarts alumni Num. of Reviews: 1230 Prologue What do you mean he felt nothing more? Shadow Hider Wednesday 21st June 2006 18:29 3rd year Num. of Reviews: 123 Prologue this is a great start, I can't wait to read more harry_ginnyphile Wednesday 21st June 2006 06:44 1st year Num. of Reviews: 44 Prologue What an awesome prologue! You've really drawn me in, can't wait to read the rest of the story! I've already added you to my author update list ... brilliant! jessy Wednesday 21st June 2006 05:32 3rd year Num. of Reviews: 114 Prologue oh sorry! i thought this was a completed one!
hurry up 4 the next
jessy Wednesday 21st June 2006 05:27 3rd year Num. of Reviews: 114 Prologue bloody hell! u killed our hero!: Milygo Wednesday 21st June 2006 03:17 1st year Num. of Reviews: 20 Prologue That was a really good first chapter. It really drew me in. I can't wait to read more. shannon Tuesday 20th June 2006 15:47 Prologue Wonderful,absolutely wonderful!!!I love that Harry's actually seriously hurt for once!!! thisgrlrox Tuesday 20th June 2006 15:19 4th year Num. of Reviews: 187 Prologue What an intense chapter! I hope eveyone is allright. Ron's goodbye sounded kind of final which makes me cringe. Nicely written chapter. I'm looking forward to reading more. Kalarien Tuesday 20th June 2006 14:00 1st year Num. of Reviews: 2 Prologue Thanks! The next bit should be coming soon, so keep an eye out! hwimsey Tuesday 20th June 2006 13:55 2nd year Num. of Reviews: 79 Prologue I really enjoyed this chapter. You write action incredibly well. Quotes I loved:
the mouth stretched open beyond the limits of the jaw
Just like now, stuck, imprisoned by a body that wouldn’t work, helpless, helpless, helpless...
His lungs felt like fire.
Ah, what happens next? Update soon, I'm sure this is going to continue to be a great story.
Thanks again for the awesome writing.
Kalarien Thursday 22nd June 2006 12:20 Prologue (Author Response) I would be remiss if I didn't give musings, my beta, credit for that last one--she added it to help a last minute change to be a little more believable. But I will take credit for the others! Thanks! Aniubis Tuesday 20th June 2006 13:40 1st year Num. of Reviews: 2 Prologue Very nice opener. Can't wait for the next. Showing 1 to 13 of 13