Hi i have just started to read your story and i think im going to enjoy it
i do have one critizm though i have noticed that you write in a more of it comes to mind so i will write it down, not a properly thought out sentance, but i love any story that involves harry's parents
pottervader Thursday 17th February 2011 16:04
1: First time to Hogwarts (Author Response)
Thanks so much for your review. My only excuse for that is that this was written about three years ago when I was just starting to write stories. I hope it will look better as you read on and the sequel.
man this story is getting good I love it when harry's parents are alive always like reading stories like this even the ones that harry goes back in time and change historys
hmm still a little forced, and having to manuever so that harry finds the same things out in this story as in the other even though circumstances are drastically different seems hard. good luck with it. It's not all going to go exactly like the stories is it?
This chapter goes much more indepth than you prologue and it makes it better for it. I really do like this idea and can't wait to see the differences as you write them. Be careful though - there are times that you switch between American writing and British writing. I can't wait to read more.
Hagrid seemed to frown, from the movement of his beard. "Never you mind, Harry. That's official Hogwarts business. Can't tell you I was at Gringotts today on an errand for Dumbledore. Oops, I shouldn't have said that. Come along now, best move on."
The more things change, the more they stay the same, eh? I really liked the way you still managed to incorporate the clues without their original introduction. All your changes are very believable...good job!
I thought it was nice to give Rose Mom's hair and Dad's eyes since Harry has Dad's hair and Mom's eyes. Nice to see Harry in keeping with canon character. I'd rather not see him strutting from the press. . . . Ahh, so you're going to follow canon plot with the Sorcerer's stone hidden at Hogwarts
pottervader Friday 21st July 2006 19:09
1: First time to Hogwarts (Author Response)
I wanted Rose to be similar to Ginny in appearance, at least in the beginning. I also decided that Lily would not allow her son to become as arrogant as his father was. Thanks for your review.
Firstly... why did Draco make that comment about the Weasleys being an 'upstart' family? I thought the Weasley family also came from old blood? Is this different for your story?
I like how everything is happening like in the book, but better because everyone is alive. lol. I don't know if that made a lot of sense. But it was suppose to be a compliment. I especially like how you gave the Weasleys more money and a stable income. I hated how Draco would always make fun of Ron's ill fortune of having less money than others.
I was wondering if you were going to put Hermione in this story. Maybe and will realise their feelings sooner this time around. Actually, before you had introduced Hermione I thought that Ron would end up with Harry's sister Rose and Harry would end up with Ginny. Guess that theory is squashed.
I wonder if Percy will still be all proper and uptight? Oh well... enough with the questions and this ridiculously long comment. Onto the next part!
pottervader Monday 10th July 2006 08:38
1: First time to Hogwarts (Author Response)
Well, the Weasleys are purebloods but not an ancient line, which I think the Potters and Malfoys are. I'm trying to follow canon a bit in the ships, at least with and and with and . Of course, the way those happen will be part of the story. Thanks for the review.
has Dad's hair and Mom's eyes. Nice to see Harry in keeping with canon character. I'd rather not see him strutting from the press. . . . Ahh, so you're going to follow canon plot with the Sorcerer's stone hidden at Hogwarts
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will realise their feelings sooner this time around. Actually, before you had introduced Hermione I thought that Ron would end up with Harry's sister Rose and Harry would end up with Ginny. Guess that theory is squashed.
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