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Dad
Friday 19th March 2010 11:53
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 464
| Ghostly Past |
A bit sad, but a little gem.
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| Delfino
Monday 19th November 2007 14:17
5th year
Num. of Reviews: 238 | Ghostly Past |
I'm crying!!  This was so sad, but wonderfully done. Great job! |
Ari
Monday 19th November 2007 21:28 | Ghostly Past (Author Response) |
Thanks  |
| gymnastgal19
Monday 12th November 2007 20:22
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2461 | Ghostly Past |
awww!!! I like this!!! I guess ginny hung around because she didnt know harry's feelings for her... 
It has never been known whether Ginny did wait for Harry, but, on his deathbed at age one-hundred-and-eighty-seven, Harry told those around him that he could see Ron, Hermione and Ginny waiting for him. He died with a smile on his face.
I love this ending!!! so awesome!!!
 
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Ari
Monday 19th November 2007 21:32 | Ghostly Past (Author Response) |
| Thank you very much! |
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Friday 17th August 2007 17:49
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| ekarpins
Tuesday 13th February 2007 17:15
| Ghostly Past |
| nothing is better than a reread. very good |
| No Idea Why I Smile
Tuesday 13th February 2007 16:06
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 72 | Ghostly Past |
| i cant swallow thanks to the lump in my throat...that was sad...good but sad...as was the other i read...but you have a slight morbid streak, no? |
| Ekarpins
Saturday 10th February 2007 15:10
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Good story.
There is some true gold in that story though its surounded by gravel.
Still Its really good.
P.S. I had the same reaction that you did when I finished Harry Potter and the nightmeres of futures past. (or atleast how much there is) How come the next button isn't working???
sorry that was off topic, still a really good story. |
| Earpins
Saturday 10th February 2007 15:09
| Ghostly Past |
Good story.
There is some true gold in that story though its surounded by gravel.
Still Its really good.
P.S. I had the same reaction that you did when I finished Harry Potter and the nightmeres of futures past. (or atleast how much there is) How come the next button isn't working???
sorry that was off topic, still a really good story. |
Ari
Monday 19th November 2007 21:26 | Ghostly Past (Author Response) |
| Thank you very much |
| lacyrachil
Monday 11th December 2006 12:56
6th year
Num. of Reviews: 251 | Ghostly Past |
| That is both sad and cheeful at the same time. Thanks for writing. |
Ari
Monday 11th December 2006 20:11 | Ghostly Past (Author Response) |
| Thank you very much for reading. |
| Rocky235
Monday 20th November 2006 08:03
3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 127 | Ghostly Past |
Pretty dang good.
Made me blow my nose. That isn't how I always measure the greatness of a story though.
Thank you for sharing. |
Ari
Monday 20th November 2006 21:13 | Ghostly Past (Author Response) |
| Thank you very much for reading! This story has really lost its touch to me, but that's no reason for others not to read it! |
| Astrid
Friday 22nd September 2006 22:32
7th year
Num. of Reviews: 336 | Ghostly Past |
| Beautiful and bittersweet. |
Ari
Saturday 23rd September 2006 00:16 | Ghostly Past (Author Response) |
| Thank you Astrid. I didn't think anyone was still reading this! But thank you for reviewing! *hug* |
| Uzamaki-girl
Sunday 3rd September 2006 13:49
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 99 | Ghostly Past |
| That was sad but good.^^ |
Ari
Tuesday 5th September 2006 21:06 | Ghostly Past (Author Response) |
Thank you ever so much for the review. Now that the competition's over, I don't get any Your review is:
Highly Appreciated! |
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Thursday 27th July 2006 16:47
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ginny why are u cry what is you talk about me no you don't love for harry?
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Ari
Saturday 29th July 2006 02:26 | Ghostly Past (Author Response) |
Err... Thanks for the review/s.
And no, Harry is my favourite love victim. If my other stories get posted, have a look. He lives in love in almost all of them. Actually, I think in all but this one.
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Thursday 27th July 2006 16:46
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| sorry iiiiiiiiiii love u ron is pretty. |
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Thursday 27th July 2006 16:45
| Ghostly Past |
| but he have to love from ginny |
| marlyse
Thursday 27th July 2006 16:43
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 because hermione and ron loves today oh my gosh i tkink you are kissed with her now sure but i am am happy or he want you before he loot at yoou it is beautiful hermione sorry you . i u  |
| marlyse
Thursday 27th July 2006 16:39
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what is you happen but do you like who boys  |
| marlyse ndoumbe
Thursday 27th July 2006 16:36
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dear harry and ginny loves today because she want you or talk about marry me and kissed with her so hermione and ron are same too to you are welcome because they are dancing with her  everday but ......hrry i tkink sometimes so very job |
| GryffindorDragon
Tuesday 25th July 2006 06:27
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 1396 | Ghostly Past |
Very nice. Too sad for Harry to lose Ginny . Very nice touch with Ginny as a ghost till Harry tells her he loves her. She was trapped by her "unrequited" love. That part is very sweet. But Harry should be happy, not stuck living for 170 years without the love of his life.
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Ari
Saturday 29th July 2006 02:24 | Ghostly Past (Author Response) |
*holds up her index finger wisely*
Ah, but who said Ginny was the love of his life? He could have been married, had kids. She was one of his best friends. Surely that is enough to have him see her while he's on the edge of the Death Realms?
lol. Thanks for reviewing. Sorry if I'm bagging you out. |
| DailyProphetReporting
Monday 24th July 2006 03:33
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 180 | Ghostly Past |
That's quite a cleaver twist. I thought this was going to be one of those dime-a-dozen, sappy reunion fics until Hermione realized Ginny was a ghost. OK, so it did end a bit sappily, but you gave us a very poignant moment recognizes his confesses his love and sets things right, and that definitely makes the ending work nicely.
I thought you did a very nice job with the characters. They're all believable, and I found Ginny's confusion and shock particularly fitting of the situation. The story telling did feel a bit rushed, but considering you wrote this in just 1,300 words, you did an excellent job getting a message across.
Nice work,
-KC |
Ari
Saturday 29th July 2006 02:21 | Ghostly Past (Author Response) |
Thanks, DPR. It's always good to see someone I know review my story/s.
Dime-a-dozen? Something to do with me? Pssht. As if anything to do with me would be dime-a-dozen!
Sappy ending? I agree! I must have been in a weird mood or something when I wrote that!
As I think I said earlier, I have to write the whole thing in a sitting, or the Plot Bunny scarpers. Then, I really don't like looking back over it, because I bag myself out so much.
Message? What message? Oh, that message. Thanks. |
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