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pyromain
Sunday 24th June 2007 11:36
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 580
| Aurora |
| What a beautifull storry, I'm sorry it didn't get into the contest it could have won. |
Evelyn
Monday 25th June 2007 08:48 | Aurora (Author Response) |
| I don't really mind not having been able to enter - I prefer getting great reviews like yours! |
| Patches
Sunday 29th April 2007 20:47
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 1141 | Aurora |
| A very good beginning. I was sure Harry was more aware than they gave him credit for. At least they were together for most of the time. And finally Voldemort is gone for good. I hope Harry went to see Ginny. That would be good. Thank you for writing. p |
Evelyn
Monday 30th April 2007 00:44 | Aurora (Author Response) |
Oh, yes, I intended for Harry to go and see Ginny. I only hinted at it at the end, but it really was a just a tiny little hint.
Thanks for taking the time to review, I appreciate it! |
| ginnysohma
Sunday 29th April 2007 09:09
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 43 | Aurora |
"There's one condition, though," Harry said. "I'm going to be the godfather."
that made me cry. it was a beautifully written story, i'e read it many times. =] |
Evelyn
Sunday 29th April 2007 10:52 | Aurora (Author Response) |
Really? Wow, thanks!  |
| Aqua Fountain*
Saturday 14th April 2007 23:41
| Aurora |
| Nice. A bit confusing, but nice |
| Alena
Tuesday 12th December 2006 00:02
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 20 | Aurora |
| Oh, the end was just perfect. |
Evelyn
Tuesday 12th December 2006 06:35 | Aurora (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you liked it! |
| Rica
Saturday 23rd September 2006 20:06
| Aurora |
 certainly is the gentleman, but I still think his and  "s realtionship went a little fast. It all worked out nicely though, and I am quite impressed with your grip of human and character emotions. Their struggles and reactions throughout the story seemed both genuine and moving. Bravo! Keep up the marvolous work!
Oh and I really wouldn't mind if you decided to write  & stories. I believe that would be an excellent idea!
Thankyou for the magnifecent writing! |
| Lunar
Sunday 3rd September 2006 06:20
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 5 | Aurora |
I did enjoy it, but there was a lot of speech and not so much action. I don't know if you meant to do that - pushing everything except Ron and Hermione's relationship into the background - on purpose, or if you wanted to keep it short-ish.
Nice story, though.  |
Evelyn
Sunday 3rd September 2006 06:55 | Aurora (Author Response) |
Thanks for telling me! Writing only about Ron and Hermione's relationship was the plan for this story. I wanted to write about their personal drama, not their hunt for Horcruxes...
Glad you enjoyed it. |
| itsme07863
Saturday 12th August 2006 10:13
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 77 | Aurora |
loooved it.   |
Evelyn
Sunday 13th August 2006 06:59 | Aurora (Author Response) |
| Thank you! |
| Shdw_Sephiroth
Saturday 12th August 2006 03:49
| Aurora |
| Please tell me, did Harry and Ginny get married or about to get married in this story? |
| Connor Landon
Friday 11th August 2006 20:51
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 188 | Aurora |
| Oh, lovely. Just lovely. I love this: A beautiful, precious moment in the midst of dark times that war can't seem to touch. And I love how Harry actually lives at the end. I've read so many typical H/G stories where Ginny is bawling her eyes over Harry's lifeless corpse. Not only is this a Ron/Hermione fic, Harry actually lives. This is a breath of fresh air. I feel badly about the competition, though. Congratulations on a well-written, sweet, entertaining story. |
Evelyn
Sunday 13th August 2006 06:53 | Aurora (Author Response) |
Thank you! I could never write about Harry dying... Firstly because I don't want to think of it, secondly because I don't think he will die in the last book (and I'm holding on to that!).
And don't worry about the competition... Reviews like yours are much better than any vote. |
| Melissa
Thursday 10th August 2006 07:19
| Aurora |
| this was great! i was crying by the end. sooo sweet! |
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Thursday 10th August 2006 01:03
| Aurora |
| that was great, thanks a lot, Polly |
| daniel_r_crazy22
Wednesday 9th August 2006 15:46
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 1230 | Aurora |
| This is a really good story, but all of them, you seem to end at the dot. Like it is the end of one story, but it doesn't continue to another. Hmm. |
Evelyn
Wednesday 9th August 2006 16:47 | Aurora (Author Response) |
Hm. I suppose you mean that it's a series of scenes that need to be added together, not one fluid narration. But then, I wanted it to be just like that...
Thanks for the review. |
| fairylights
Tuesday 8th August 2006 20:58
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 8 | Aurora |
| Fabulous! |
Evelyn
Wednesday 9th August 2006 02:38 | Aurora (Author Response) |
| Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! |
| critmo
Tuesday 8th August 2006 06:10
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 684 | Aurora |
| Brilliant story, even though I can't see Hermione not taking precautions. Otherwise it's very nicely developed. |
Evelyn
Tuesday 8th August 2006 08:48 | Aurora (Author Response) |
I can't see Hermione not taking precautions : *whispers conspiratorially* I can't see her doing that either, normally. Must have been the stress. 
Thanks so much for the review! |
| Wooster
Monday 7th August 2006 10:35
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 525 | Aurora |
| Aw. Very sweet. Definitely worthy of story-of-the-week. I love how Harry knew that she was pregnant without being told. Why did they think he wouldn't find out??? Great story all-in-all. |
Evelyn
Monday 7th August 2006 13:38 | Aurora (Author Response) |
Thank you!
Why did they think he wouldn't find out??? People don't always think logically when they're in a stressful situation... But they intended to tell Harry at some point. Just not then. I know, bad excuse for a brain like Hermione.  |
| HG4Ever
Monday 7th August 2006 09:34
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 3 | Aurora |
| was very cute....I wish there was more . Please have a sequel! |
Evelyn
Monday 7th August 2006 13:35 | Aurora (Author Response) |
Thank so much for the review! But sorry, there won't be a sequel. I will be writing other stories, maybe with some , though... I suppose you'd like that, considering you name.  |
| dancinginmagic
Saturday 22nd July 2006 05:29
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 166 | Aurora |
Lovely. Just lovely.
The idea of a sphinx! - I like that! It's such a marvellous idea - who knows what Harry could meet on the hunt? I wouldn't put it past Voldemort to use the mist to defend his Horcruxes. Disorientate the enemy... *dreams of the possibilities*
I like the trio-ish scene after they fought Nagini. Very sweet!
~Sarah |
Evelyn
Saturday 22nd July 2006 07:06 | Aurora (Author Response) |
Aw, thanks! You just gave a big smile...
I'm glad you liked the background story with the hunt and the sphinx and all that... Could that be a plot bunny forming in your head? Go write it! |
| Caitlin Neal
Friday 21st July 2006 07:29
| Aurora |
great story, beautiful, sad, unique.... keep it up.....i want a 2nd chp and more about their wedding and child etc etc lol
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| AndyYankees9
Monday 17th July 2006 13:42
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 2 | Aurora |
| that was pretty good, but u shouuld make it longer. |
Evelyn
Monday 17th July 2006 15:10 | Aurora (Author Response) |
Thanks you!
While I was writing it, I would have liked to make it longer, but there was a lenght limit for the contest (even if something went wrong with that in the end). But I'm not re-writing it now...  |
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