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Reviews For Bright Eyes by HermioneWeasley1972

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LilacQueen
Monday 13th September 2010 22:03


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 6

Bright Eyes
I really like it! Very bittersweet!
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webster
Tuesday 13th April 2010 09:15


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 56

Bright Eyes
Sad, but cute.
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gymnastgal19
Tuesday 2nd October 2007 17:11


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2461

Bright Eyes
so sad! Thought that it was ginny, dismissed that right away because nothing was mentioned about her hair and then i thought that it was hermonie lol
RIP
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Tuesday 8th August 2006 06:14


Bright Eyes
I found this...odd. Harry seemed too emotional for my tastes, and I know you meant there to be a twist for people not expecting Hedwig, but I didn't take that as a good thing. I could maybe, maybe see him acting like that if it were Ginny...but Hedwig? Sorry, no. Too close to bestiality for me.
HermioneWeasley1972
Wednesday 9th August 2006 08:21
Bright Eyes (Author Response)
I found this...odd. Harry seemed too emotional for my tastes, and I know you meant there to be a twist for people not expecting Hedwig, but I didn't take that as a good thing. I could maybe, maybe see him acting like that if it were Ginny...but Hedwig? Sorry, no. Too close to bestiality for me.


I do want everyone to know that I didn't mean it to sound like beastiality. Hedwig was really his first friend in the wizarding world and I really think he would feel sad at her death.
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Caroline
Monday 24th July 2006 13:52


Bright Eyes
Beautiful!
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GryffindorDragon
Monday 24th July 2006 08:17


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 1396

Bright Eyes
Nice twist at the end. I thought it was going to be Ginny , but you made it be Hedwig . Kind of humorous after all the sadness.
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Wednesday 19th July 2006 18:38


Bright Eyes
Touching
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claireanne1234
Wednesday 19th July 2006 10:38


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 30

Bright Eyes
i new you ment Hedwig from the title lol but it still very sad. oh and i had the song playing as i was reading it and i was in tears nerly.
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dancinginmagic
Tuesday 18th July 2006 20:47


4th year
Num. of Reviews: 166

Bright Eyes
Wow. I love it. I didn't see Hedwig coming!

Sarah
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me
Tuesday 18th July 2006 11:54


Bright Eyes
i just want to point out that it is very difficult to feel sorry for poor .
But the little trick was very nice, of course
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Bright_eyes
Tuesday 18th July 2006 09:20


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 4

Bright Eyes
You had me fooled. I had to read it a second time knowing that it was hegwig.

I think this line started telling me it wasn't ginny:

"He remembered the day they met; it was one that he would never forget. Her beauty had stunned him, as did her beautiful eyes."

I was thinking; he didn't fall in love with ginny the first time he saw her? When I got to the final twist it all came together. I didn't want ginny to die. Lovely story and wonderful ending.

Sarah
By the way, good title
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Tuesday 18th July 2006 09:18


Bright Eyes
awww that was so sweet i thought it was ginny but then it said that ginny laid her hand on his shoulder
HermioneWeasley1972
Tuesday 18th July 2006 09:19
Bright Eyes (Author Response)
awww that was so sweet i thought it was ginny but then it said that ginny laid her hand on his shoulder


Thank you. LOL That was the goal, to keep you guessing who it was until the very end.
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melissa
Tuesday 18th July 2006 08:33


Bright Eyes
i KNEW it wasn't ginny, however, i did think it waws his mom, not hedwig. very nice twist.
HermioneWeasley1972
Tuesday 18th July 2006 08:46
Bright Eyes (Author Response)
Thank you. I thought it would raise some eyebrows. *snickers*harrypotterfan1972@gmail.com
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Novera
Tuesday 18th July 2006 08:25


4th year
Num. of Reviews: 157

Bright Eyes
Aww, soo sweet
HermioneWeasley1972
Tuesday 18th July 2006 08:26
Bright Eyes (Author Response)
Thank you so much.
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