ROTFOMAO!!!! This has to be one of the funniest exhanges in all of HP fanficdom! You have a wonderful flair for dialogue, particularly that with sarcasm, humor or self-deprecation. Your handling of the conversation between Ginny and Olivier was brilliant....how many authors could keep a non-French speaking reader engaged and amused through a conversation in French?
Although the premise for the story is a bit of a stretch, your follow-through with people acting out of good intentions and struggling with Murphy's First Law ("Anything that can go wrong, will go wrong, and at the worst possible moment."), not to mention bungling through some of life's most important choices, is so very human and endearing.
GAAH! Stupid, stupid Ron! Grr. It was all special-momenty and then... *sigh* Well, all I can say is that I can not WAIT for the next part. The suspense is killing me! *dramatic pose* Yeah. So hurry up please! Great chapter. I love Tatiana/Tonks. And Olivier getting bat-bogified!! Mwahaha. ;D